Soccer Crossing: Conquering the Top of the Premier League
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Description
Playing a soccer game traveled to 2002 and became the Great British Empire Star of Arsenal Youth Training. He is going to transition from goalkeeper to be a striker, a most legendary career begins! Juventus: the ball license, side license, plus host, co-organizer, all the units, all my people, how do you fight with me? Coach: rely on Arthur ah, he is the king here! Crow: "Don't be afraid, illusion, it's all an illusion, it looks like we Manchester United are going to come out with the real thing." Messi: "I am Messi,I am now panicking a batch of ......"
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- GiveBreathe
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 7
- Views
- 4,054
Chapters(15 total)
- Chapter 15. "Iron Mountain LeaningOct 31, 2023
- Chapter 14 [I'm not here to hang around]Oct 30, 2023
- Chapter 13. [Accompaniment, Trial]Oct 29, 2023
- Chapter 12: The Pretty Sister Who Often Invites You to DinnerOct 28, 2023
- Chapter 11: Darkest Hour, Special Training ResultsOct 27, 2023
- Chapter 10：Start trainingOct 25, 2023
- Chapter 9: VioletOct 25, 2023
- Chapter 8: It's all the system's fault.Oct 24, 2023
- Chapter 7: The Eagle's EyeOct 20, 2023
- Chapter 6 InvincibleOct 20, 2023
- Chapter 5.A piece of cakeOct 20, 2023
- Chapter4 ：GoalOct 18, 2023
- Chapter 3 ：Family MembersOct 18, 2023
- Chapter 2：The neighbor is an English actressOct 18, 2023
- Chapter 1 ：Becoming a Game CharacterOct 18, 2023
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Community Reviews(1)
- LackiesRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0There's a lot to like here for fans of these sport success types of stories. I like the initial impression of the MC, he's not a hardcore training zombie. like Zachary from Greatest of All Time, and while he has his witty moments he's much more even keeled than Player Manager's Max Best. If you're a fan of either of those novels there's a good chance you can find something familiar feeling and enjoyable here. That said other than some superficial similarities Soccer Crossing stands on its own.
Its still early days in the serial, but the pacing seems reasonable despite a lot of information and worldbuilding being established in the early chapters. Overall the "system" is comfortably in the background and lets the story and characters breath. There are a few notably weak bits interspersed throughout particularly where idiomatic or figurative language is involved. The chapters are generally grammatically sound and comprehending them is not an issue.
Overall, I think this serial is already on track to be an enjoyable read and it has a great deal of potential if the author works on their weaknesses and strives to improve diligently.