When The Petals Burn

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21 years after the third World War, the world has reversed in a seemingly stable state of peace. But buried deep under that foundation of lies, problems of discrimination, violence and corruption can be seen. To fix those, the "Kaizen Academy" was founded, which has the goal of creating future soldiers that shall bring back true peace.

Kawakami Rei is one of the lucky people that got accepted into the academy, and will now have to overcome various problems, meet unique people and shoulder the burden of a country's future.

Chapters(4 total)

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  • ErikkkRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The latest chapter was really intense, I didn't even notice that it was the longest. I also really love how you described the feeling of basically transferring consciousness. And the whole metapher with the hill in the wasteland is great, though I'm still unsire what the "weight" exactly is, since it seems to have an actual appearance and voice. While I do get a little confused with the names sometimes, I still hope you keep the intensity up and flesh the characters out more. Especially the director seems like such a badass and I like the green haired dude too (forgot his name, sry)