The Story of Zabu

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The Story of Zabu

As the souls of the universe slip through the cracks of fate and the gears of time unwind their twisted gears to turn the stage yet again , something has gone awry. A new being has made its way into existence, a soul with power that comes along once a era.

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Zabu leads a strange life. His father , Lord Vedro is a grizzled warlord turned duke has him do pushups by the hundred. The apple of his eye has a strange fascination for Umbrellas with sword like edges and Granny Badu a sage that lives in the attic, tends to throws him against the bounds of reality. Even still,

Zabu may be the strangest of them all.

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Status: Hiatus
Author: ThoughtsOverYonder

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Rating: 5.0/ 5.0
Followers: 1
Views: 3,181

Chapters(18 total)

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Matthew Nesheim (died Jan '24)Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This book doesn’t feel like it takes a long to get going as other books I’ve read on here and so I’m dropping a review early because I think more people need to check this story out. The author has a real sense of how to write action and dialogue that I enjoy and I think others would too. There’s also a little bit of humor to the book that I think is lacking in a lot of other stories on here. I think the characters Zabu meets are interesting and have a lot of heart and humor to them.
What you have here is a very fun fantasy story with a believable and ambitious Main Character and a solid supporting characters around him. The protagonist, Zabu, is an ambitious and talented young man from House Vedro who starts in a training dojo of some sort where he must pit his skills against other students.
So far there is some solid action with the training scenes and I also enjoy the dialogue between Zabu and the maid Nina. Overall, the author is building a fun and believable world around his Main Character that I look forward to exploring more as the book progresses.
Overall I think it’s a great start to a very promising story.