Desire
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Description
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An all powerful entity bestows individuals with a powerful brand in the form of a tattoo. Using the system that is controlled by the tattoo, you can learn supernatural abilities, acquire knowledge unknown to man, and acquire objects that would only be found in fiction. The world is changing... and it has yet to be determined if it is for better or worse.Two friends who grew up together, Ace and Vincent, have been chosen. Ace lives for physical improvement. He loves the feeling of breaking his records and growing stronger. Unfortunately, he has plateaued in recent months, discouraging him greatly.Vincent is plagued by little to no desire in anything he does. Good grades? Successful life? He feels nothing. Except, perhaps, the feeling of pain and fear. Sadly for him, modern day society is a peaceful one.The arrival of the tattoo flipped their lives upside down. It granted them the ability to fulfill their desires. However... they weren't the only ones who were given the tattoo.
DISCLAIMER: As each volume finishes on RRL, it will be removed and uploaded to the Amazon Kindle Unlimited Program. Thank you for your understanding.
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- Status
- Ongoing
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- munxy
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.9/ 5.0
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- 76
Chapters(8 total)
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Community Reviews(10)
- knifexthriveRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Great story. Great characters
Easy to understand powers
Grammar amazing, nice flow in fighting arcs
Need more information on characters to make them more human simply he likes this or favourite color any personal information will do.
I enjoy this story so thank you - DominiRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Please continue this series. I have read each one through amazon and have to say. They are very enjoyable.
- EnhozRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0It's honestly not that bad,there will always be people complaining on the choices that the characters took,but i think they are somewhat right.
I did not expect this grammar nor the quality.Keep up the good work i love it - MyriddinRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Style 4.5 : The style is well done, but not amazing. While almost all parts of the story flow well together and the writing is solid there are occasionally bits of dialogue which feel a little naff and can tug on immersion. Overall its still really good, but some time spent on revision and editing would not be amiss.
Story 5 : I love the story, not much more to say about it as I don't want to give spoilers. It was really nice to see how to scale shifted seamlessly as the story progressed in a natural manner, and the plot overall has been enojoyable so far, keep it up!
Character 4 : This might be one of the weaker parts of the story, while the characters are nice, and they have a good dynamic, they also don't feel very deep. And thats just talking about the main two, if its not them then they might as well be cardboard cutouts, even Alice, who is quite close to the main guys, doesn't have much behined her and overall some extra character development would be very nice.
Grammar 5 : If there have been any mistakes then I've simply not noticed them, 5/5 for this I guess.
Overall 5 : While the characters are a little weak, the innovative system, great story, and world building pull this novel into the realm of 5/5, afterall this IS RRL we're talking about so I can't be too harsh :P overall, its really enjoyable to read and just a lot of fun. - DeimosRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Before you even read my review. Just give it a try. You won' regret it. I only regret not finding it sooner
A very compelling story with unexpected turns and deep emotional ties. The main characters are strong and aren' faces with too much and rarely is there nothing going on. No filler chapters. Strong character development, as we learn more throughout the story and they change to fit their position in the world. The abilities are unique too. I expected more of an assassin type for The Demon. And I was fooled, however, what we did get I decided I like even more. Characters are relatable and its fun to watch their interactions. - Myron SpignerRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Great story I hope there is more to come. I do want there to be more depth going further. I feel like as the MC's get stronger the emotional connection is no longer there. We know ace is fighting to get stronger for earth and the ppl he loves. But there is hardly any connection with the ppl he love besides his best friend, so for me at least I would like to see more of a connection even if he find it with someone else.
- Not_A_HatRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Here's what the story seems to be about so far:
Two friends, Ace and Vincent, get tatoos that give them litRPG/gamer type abilities. They complete challenges and buy stats, and become enemies and allies with other 'players' as the world begins to change. It's kinda 'apocalypse litRPG', with the twist that not everyone is a player, and the abilities are very broad; Qi, vampirism, and magic have shown up so far.
It's fast-paced and fun, but also fairly grindy; they spend a lot of time leveling up, and there isn't a whole lot of plot or drama yet.
The writing is fairly simplistic, but seems to be improving. It is easy to read and I had no trouble following what was happening, so that's a plus.
Check it out if you like litRPG in the real world. - Detrius VimesRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5I really enjoyed it at the start, but now it just feels like a bad anime. I feel like the bad guys are one dimensional and I die a little bit inside every time hahaha is spelled out.
- EpicDumpster-fireRoyal Road★★ 1.5I was amazed with this story, the concept of tattoo givin their users powers and the ability to complete challanges and buy stats/abilities was refreshing to say the least. It was a rare LitRpg with a world where everyone could limitless and i loved it.
The story itself feel flat,IMO you will never find yourself at the edge of your seat waiting for the new chapter and you will never think about this story after 5 minutes you read the last installment.
Honestly untill the author do a re-write and flesh it out, i can only describe it as extremly forgettable! - earthdrakeRoyal Road★ 1.0The novel started decently enough however over time it becomes stupid, more stupid and idiotic.
The characters stop making any sense, the plot is a tool to force people to do what the author wants, intrinsic logic, character development, none of that matter.
The principal idea was decent but overtime and by the end of it the novel just loses any and all qualities that actually have anything interesting. Oh yeah, over time things are just forgotten since the author clearly contradicts himself at several points.