Desire

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Description

Volume Iis now available on Amazon!

An all powerful entity bestows individuals with a powerful brand in the form of a tattoo. Using the system that is controlled by the tattoo, you can learn supernatural abilities, acquire knowledge unknown to man, and acquire objects that would only be found in fiction. The world is changing... and it has yet to be determined if it is for better or worse.Two friends who grew up together, Ace and Vincent, have been chosen. Ace lives for physical improvement. He loves the feeling of breaking his records and growing stronger. Unfortunately, he has plateaued in recent months, discouraging him greatly.Vincent is plagued by little to no desire in anything he does. Good grades? Successful life? He feels nothing. Except, perhaps, the feeling of pain and fear. Sadly for him, modern day society is a peaceful one.The arrival of the tattoo flipped their lives upside down. It granted them the ability to fulfill their desires. However... they weren't the only ones who were given the tattoo.

DISCLAIMER: As each volume finishes on RRL, it will be removed and uploaded to the Amazon Kindle Unlimited Program. Thank you for your understanding.

Information

Status: Ongoing
Year: 2018
Author: munxy

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 605
Views: 33,460

Chapters(8 total)

What readers say about Desire

“A Great STORY, what else needs to be said...”
voldRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“Please continue this series. I have read each one through amazon and have to say. They are very enjoyable.”
DominiRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(10)

voldRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
A Great STORY, what else needs to be said...
DominiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Please continue this series. I have read each one through amazon and have to say. They are very enjoyable.
EnhozRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It's honestly not that bad,there will always be people complaining on the choices that the characters took,but i think they are somewhat right.
I did not expect this grammar nor the quality.Keep up the good work i love it
MyriddinRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Style 4.5 : The style is well done, but not amazing. While almost all parts of the story flow well together and the writing is solid there are occasionally bits of dialogue which feel a little naff and can tug on immersion. Overall its still really good, but some time spent on revision and editing would not be amiss.
Story 5 : I love the story, not much more to say about it as I don't want to give spoilers. It was really nice to see how to scale shifted seamlessly as the story progressed in a natural manner, and the plot overall has been enojoyable so far, keep it up!
Character 4 : This might be one of the weaker parts of the story, while the characters are nice, and they have a good dynamic, they also don't feel very deep. And thats just talking about the main two, if its not them then they might as well be cardboard cutouts, even Alice, who is quite close to the main guys, doesn't have much behined her and overall some extra character development would be very nice.
Grammar 5 : If there have been any mistakes then I've simply not noticed them, 5/5 for this I guess.
Overall 5 : While the characters are a little weak, the innovative system, great story, and world building pull this novel into the realm of 5/5, afterall this IS RRL we're talking about so I can't be too harsh :P overall, its really enjoyable to read and just a lot of fun.
WitchCraftRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Awesome awesome story. I read all the chapters that where out in one sitting (42 of them). I thouroughly enjoyed it and cannot wait for more to be released. The Main Characters are some seriously badass dudes, Ace and Vincent. More details about the story below, in the spoiler.
Quick btw if you don't want to read the spoiler:
It comes down to two things, do you like badassery and awesome as fuck powers? Read it.
Spoiler: Spoiler
Alright, I love how Ace and Vincent have two completely different roles, and have taken on apprentices of sorts as well. I do think though, that there are a couple significant gaps in thecharacter development. That being said it doesn't bother me too much, and this still turns out as a great story.
That being said, there are hardly any character descriptions other than that of Ace and Vincent, not that I really mind as I can just fill in the blanks with my own imagination. I would like to see a bit more descriptive detail though. Especially of some of the other characters such as Ace's Girlfriend and maybe some of the other townspeople or generals people.
In addition to this there is hardly any character development for anyone else as well. I'm sure as time goes on we will start seeing more characters come into play more often and learn more about them as well (I hope).
All in all, I really do love this story and look forward to all the chapters in the future. All of my critisism is meant to be constructive and am in no manner trying to bash the author or his awesome story.
Zed_OudRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
World-disrupting-game-shop-system done right! Lot’s of worldbuilding. One of the only world-is-invaded-by-monsters story I’ve seen where the story doesn’t start and die in one generic city, but instead encompasses and attempts to include the whole world in the ever-building after effects of this type of story setting.
Good characters and mechanics used consistently.
Bravo.
knifexthriveRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Great story. Great characters
Easy to understand powers
Grammar amazing, nice flow in fighting arcs
Need more information on characters to make them more human simply he likes this or favourite color any personal information will do.
I enjoy this story so thank you
DeimosRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Before you even read my review. Just give it a try. You won' regret it. I only regret not finding it sooner
A very compelling story with unexpected turns and deep emotional ties. The main characters are strong and aren' faces with too much and rarely is there nothing going on. No filler chapters. Strong character development, as we learn more throughout the story and they change to fit their position in the world. The abilities are unique too. I expected more of an assassin type for The Demon. And I was fooled, however, what we did get I decided I like even more. Characters are relatable and its fun to watch their interactions.
funkyguy09Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This story is very enjoyable to read at this time but it could definitely stand to improve! If you're reading this review then i press you to just start reading this, you'll enjoy it.
Style - I like it well enough. it gets the job done, the story is written in a simple manner that enables the author to get the story across to the reader but it could certainly be improved, however i feel this just comes with experience, at the moment it's fine.
Grammar - The grammar is great, i haven't noticed any spelling mistakes and all the sentences are structured in a good manner, i also haven't noticed things like constant use of short sentences or not enough enough longer sentences, it certainly feels like it always has correct spacing and a varied sentence length. The story is very easy to read because of this.
Story - At the current chapter im at (56, im a patreon supporter, thats how much i enjoy it, i pay money for it.) There is certianly a plot being worked on in the background of the story however it feels like our story is skipping forward a lot to be able to get to the bigger plot behind the story, i think it can be slowed down and go through the plot at a slower pace building on the world and the characters. Also I think it wouldn't hurt to foreshadow any future problems more, and make it more subtle. World building is a gradual process, that's why it is named building, not placing. It needs to be constantly worked on.
Characters - I believe the characters are a sour point in this story, not because they're horrible to read about, but because they could be so much better, at the moment it feels like they're just there to keep the plot train moving along. Whereas there's definitely enough substance in the world that the characters could be improved upon throughout.
Spoiler alert ahead
For example take Allen, a side character, his major interaction with the MC's went like this "Hi, i don't trust you, whats your story?" Allen says "Well all my family was killed by a bad
Myron SpignerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Great story I hope there is more to come. I do want there to be more depth going further. I feel like as the MC's get stronger the emotional connection is no longer there. We know ace is fighting to get stronger for earth and the ppl he loves. But there is hardly any connection with the ppl he love besides his best friend, so for me at least I would like to see more of a connection even if he find it with someone else.