Renewal : A Daughter of Fate - VILLAINESS/LITRPG/CULTIVATION/OTOME - (Book One Stubbed)

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Death has a funny way of finding Lynette Heversham, but after three lifetimes filled with pain, anger, and misplaced emotions, she finds herself waking, yet again, as her younger self.

Cursed to re-live as the Crazy Cerue Lady, can she survive her fourth time round, or will her past as a villainess bite back to haunt her? Can she survive the Viscount’s household when they have killed her before? As the unwanted adopted daughter, can guidance from the gods push her to unlock the power of her core to fight back against the summoners and demonic beasts who wish her dead?

Will this life finally hold the threads to change her fate?

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This is a developing story I hope to improve and bring my ideas to life with. It follows a rise in power for a young girl exploring a system of magic and complications of country politics and the monsters that threaten the Zopan Empire. I would appreciate any comments on your thoughts on the story so far / where I can improve.

TO NOTE :

This is light LITRPG - It is not the main focus but comes in around chp 5/8. There is Otome inspiration mixed in.

Progression Cultivation - This is combined with the LITRPG system but is more central.

Romance - This will be a slow-burn romance, again not the main focus, but it will be there. You will have to guess who this may be for a while :P

Regression - This is a Villainess who has regressed, experiencing a part of her world she didn't get to in her previous lives

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Status
Ongoing
Year
2024
Author
JaffaJessie ( J.L.Rabone )

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LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICFEMALE LEADMARTIAL ARTSROMANCE SUBPLOTSTRONG LEADGAMELITREINCARNATIONWAR AND MILITARYHIGH FANTASYVILLAINOUS LEADCULTIVATIONPROGRESSIONWUXIATIME TRAVELTIME LOOPATTRACTIVE LEAD

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Chapters(15 total)

What readers say about Renewal : A Daughter of Fate - VILLAINESS/LITRPG/CULTIVATION/OTOME - (Book One Stubbed)

  • “Loving the character progression can't wait for each chapter to land. Not only the main character develops but all the characters have perspective and backgrounds to evolve their actions and relationships - love how no character is good or bad but evolving…”
    jaxxauRoyal Road5.0 / 5
  • “This one is a hell of a ride. Seriously. First off, if you're a fan of meaty, really-get-into-it chapters with great description and characters that will knock you off your feet, this is your novel. I'm impressed. The premise to the story is incredible with…”
    keeganashleyliveRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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  • jaxxauRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Loving the character progression can't wait for each chapter to land. Not only the main character develops but all the characters have perspective and backgrounds to evolve their actions and relationships - love how no character is good or bad but evolving and complex with a lot of mystery around the plot development - binge reading for sure
  • keeganashleyliveRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This one is a hell of a ride. Seriously.
    First off, if you're a fan of meaty, really-get-into-it chapters with great description and characters that will knock you off your feet, this is your novel. I'm impressed. The premise to the story is incredible with the bracelet, the past and re-doing lives bit. Fantastic. Then, the author adds these characters that are so easy to fall in love with and feel for. The emotions are tangible as the MC is brought into a game-like structure and begins to test the waters with what she's able to do.
    There's growth. There's challenge. There's friendship. There's struggle. Everything is looped in beautifully with very well-executed writing. I really couldn't see any reason to dock any stars. There were no noticeable grammar errors and the style of the writing was, as I mentioned, really spot-on.
    The story and the characters is where the main draw for me lies though (excepting, of course, the amazing length of each chapter---how does the author churn out that many words in the short time period they're being released lately? It's admirable.). The characters are relatable and deep, and there's a surprise around every turn. I highly recommend this.
    Well done, and kudos to the author.
  • TikizaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is one of the most captivating books I’ve experienced this year—a true standout that has left an indelible mark on me. From the very first chapter to the last. The characters are the beating heart of this story; each is vividly drawn, dynamic, and unforgettable. The main character, in particular, feels refreshingly authentic—flawed yet endearing, their growth over time mirrors our own struggles and triumphs. Their voice is so distinct and relatable that you can’t help but root for them every step of the way.
    What truly sets this story apart are the masterfully woven flashbacks. These throwbacks don’t just fill in gaps—they deepen character motivations, reveal hidden layers of conflict, and create a rich tapestry of history that makes the present-day plot even more compelling. The author’s skill at balancing past and present is seamless, offering moments of reflection that feel earned rather than forced.
    The story itself is pure joy to consume. It’s filled with wit, and emotional beats that resonate long after the final page. I’m already itching for a sequel; there’s so much potential, and I’d love to see these characters return. If you’re looking for a story with unforgettable moments and characters, do yourself a favor: read it. You’ll thank me later!
  • RenuxRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I recommend this series, especially those who enjoy the "I was reborn in a noble house" type dramas.
    What's great about this one is it's an ADVENTURE. There is action and angst in equal measure.
    I admire this writer's pacing and have bought the book on Amazon. Worth the read. Keep up the great work!
    [writing more to hit that 200/w minimum for advanced reviews]
    Re: the Stats
    What makes this one stand apart compared to other RPGLits is that along with stats (that we really don't see much until maybe a third way into the story, then they become regular) there are also the visual novel elements of "likability" with some of the characters. Please note, "likability" does not equal romance.
    Character that have the "likability" value may have the power over MC to end her life
    Re: the Adventure
    I hate to admit, but too much action and I get bored. This one did not have this problem. Fighting scenes were split with inter-character tensions, discovering new places/power, etc.
    Re: the sub-characters
    I LOVE THE WOMEN IN THIS STORY. This is sooooo rare for me. None of them are annoying. Her sister is unobservant, but that's her character's weakness.
    The male characters...how do I say this...the MC has been abused by family/servants/society. People believe she is a liar and not as noble, so they treat her poorly. This will anger you, and that's what makes writing good, getting the reader to have an emotional reaction. I am very excited to see how the "likability" characters develop.
    Thank you author! You're inspiring!
  • DrellzieRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The story is similar to many villainous regression stories. It differs in that this is their third death and so the MC enters their final life. It also adds some very light LRPG elements.
    The characters that mistreated the MC in her previous lives are, a bit too quickly, forgiven. But the rest of the happenings are interesting and well written enough that it isn't a major issue.
    So far so good, interested to find out how the story continues.
  • Frodo_SagbagRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This story follows a girl - Lynette - as she navigates her fourth attempt at life. Classicly, she is an outcast from her family, being a stray brought in by their late mother.
    Each life has brought her different misfortunes, leading to a very strong willed character, with the tired nature of someone who has been through much pain, but with the hope of a girl her age.
    Whilst the story is short right now, I can see the potential for growth, with Lynette being so weak, but with skills brought over from previous lives, there are many ways her story could go. I am very excited to see how her story evolves, and what she turns in to.
    I wanted to briefly note that the grammar is only slightly off, with very minor spelling mistakes. That is all, however. The style and prose is better than most of what you can read here, and I would be surprised to see this as an ebook - especially with an editor. The potential for the story, character, and world, is great.
    My one big gripe, is the release schedule. I devour content like nothing, so even once a week is tough for me. My one piece of advice is to find a schedule and stick to it, even at once a fortnight. Then, you can add surprise chapters after 7 days, or bunches of chapters to meet writeathons, followers goals etc.
    Keep up the good work, I look forward to more!
  • DynalonRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    There are only 10 chapters so I will keep it short - it is surprisingly good. Grammar and style are above average, world-building is well done, characters feel alive (especially MC).
    It is too soon to judge litrpg elements, but they are present in small amounts. Only thing which might be a problem for some readers is release schedule of new chapters, it is very irregular.
  • BrGastlRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    We aren´t that far into the story yet so I can´t review to much about it. Though it looks like it will be a very promising and ambitious work which I always support - an advanced review might happen at chapter 80+.
    The setting is relatively common; nothing over the top or revolutionary we haven't seen in some form. More or less Villainess-MC gets a chance to relive her life and correct her mistakes. While we also see game like typical LitRPG System and Stats.
    Though what I like is that the author isn't just reproducing some generic content. Hes adding his own ideas to it alike combining LitRPG with Cultivation. And the Likeability thingy; is that some Otome game implementation? I like it though. It makes characters and their relationships between each other rather complex and we will see probably many thrilling conflicts between them which makes the whole story much more genuine and complex than typical levelgrinding progressive LitRPG novels. I can totally see myself pulling out a chart and drawling lines in potential future chapters. At the moment we didn't get to much world building, but I can at least say that it feels like a world like ours just with a pinch of magic and RPG system. Nothing about it feels artificial beside some gods having their champion with some adventoureous fate though thats given for any story beside SoL.
    Some people critizised the editing and language, though I have to say its didn´t really impact me. I barely noticed anything - though my english is just my 2nd language - and the author is already bettering himself over the past chapters nothing really which should deter someone from reading.
  • Doglia5Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The author's focus on the main character pays off. The way that it is a regression instead of an isekai replacement brings depth to the main character's trauma and reactions. The trauma and reactions are written well without being over blown or hand waved. The premise is a bit over done but the way the author makes their work unique is worth it. I noticed very few grammar errors. Of the grammar errors I noticed they did not interfere with the flow of the story. The main character has access to a system that allows her to see their likeability with each "character". At first I thought that this would end terribly as the main character wears a mask to farm likeability without any character development. However the author works around this very well and successfully develops their story and characters despite the common limitations of the implemented system. The author's method of utilizing the soft lit-rpg elements is very well implemented where system skills are a measure of the person's ability not how much the system boosts that person. Like most novels this novel is not for everyone. The main character has experienced trauma and from what I have seen the author is not afraid to explore it. I think it is a great read and one of the best villainess novels out there that transcends the op mc mary sue nature most of them eventually follow. The main character is a little immature for her supposed age but if the author digs into that more with the trauma aspect and utilizes character development this can become a high point of look how far she's come from naive sort of emotionally weak but kinda coping while somewhat being able to defend herself. I think that by the end of the army training arc we should see that development at least in the self-defense and coping aspects. Of course I am just a random person on the internet so like you should with everything take my review with a grain or handful of salt.
  • nking536Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    A brilliant read. The plot has a lot of mystery as well as allowing for world building as the mc has a valid reason for not knowing things so you learn with her. I love the complex and dramatic relations she has with other characters, especially with all the ups and downs they entail

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