Pokemon Oasis
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
From abandoned to finding his destiny in a familiar world, follow Heath in his quest to become a Pokémon master thatonly few have accomplished.
This world is AU, I don't own anything but my OC characters
*Not sure if I want to make this story my main priority or make a completely "Original piece" *
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Satyr_o7
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 67
- Views
- 3,754
Chapters(2 total)
Reviews
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Community Reviews(4)
- Althalus_93Royal Road★★★★★ 4.5The Author really fixed the story by rewriting a few chapters and adding in new content between time skips it's a lot Better now, and a lot more consistent. The pacing is also vastly improved and the characters are more fleshed out. If you're a Pokemon fan it's definitely worth a read especially how the world is a lot more substantial than the games. Great Job Author!! Thanks for fixing it!
- FireguardRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Has some grammar hangouts that are auto corrected. First few chapters are the worst but it gets better. Long chapters.
Standard Pokémon setup but the story is decent so far. If the pace keeps up and there is a framer sweep this should show up on rising stars for royal road - GreenPangolinRoyal Road★★★ 2.5It looks like a regular Pokemon isekai, but the twist is that the protagonist is working under a cultivation-style system. I think it would work better if that applied to everyone, not just his team, so far it just feels like a new flavour of unstoppable protagonist OPness.
Even so, I would be interested in where it's going, if not for the poor grammar. Most of what enjoyment I tried to have has been bled away by me not comprehending the text. Sorry, author, but it's a mess. - OranosRoyal Road★★★ 2.5its a decent story with a system twist on a classic pokemon isekai.
but the story needs an editor to catch the occasional autocorrected wrong word.
the big problem for me is that the author throws in time skips between chapters that have plot relevant and interesting content thats referenced, but never actually written down. its like a reverse cliffhanger. i had to go back and make sure i didnt miss a chapter somewhere.
its like that cliche where they say "well never get out of this" followed by a jump cut to after they got out of it, except without the first half. its confusing.