Under The Obsidian Sun [Dropped & Bad]

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Sylen wakes up in a new world of magic, monsters, and dungeons with no memory of who he was before. His only direction is to 'balance the world' whatever the hell that means. All the while he has to deal with uncertainty, fear, and a being with seemingly infinite power living in his core. At least it seems to like him.

Future Tags that I won't put up yet, so as not to disappoint people using genre search: Steampunk, possibly Secret Identity, Dystopia, and Anti-hero lead. These are the only ones that I don't have listed right now. I'll try not to pull any others out of the woodwork, especially harem, no offense if you like harem, but I am not a fan personally.

This is my first work of fiction and the first time I've really dived into writing. It probably won't be good and might be kind of tropey, but I hope I will improve as I go along.

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This story is garbage, lol. I plan on completely rewriting it later because the concept is cool, but I did it very poorly. Still, I'm leaving this up because it was my first real attempt at writing, and that's sentimental to me.

Chapters(10 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • AutophagiaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Seems interesting, although the grammar needs a bit of work./ Maybe a bit more proof reading can help, beyond that the characters seem to lack a bit of depth.
    The story is intriguing - even if it is a bit troupie, and I love the style and colorization(you can do that?) but yeah I'll come back in a while.