The Snake God's Dungeon

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Description

Even the gentlest person can become a monster if their loved ones are threatened.Torgajust happens to be slightly more dangerous than most.Torga, the man once known as 'The Devourer', survived the destruction of his own universe by the skin of his teeth. Now he's faced with an even more terrifying ordeal- rebuilding it from scratch.At least he's not alone in his endeavor- though he never would have imagined that by saving his dear wife Reina, he was forcing an entirely new existence onto her, and the consequences that came with such an act.Beings from across the multiverse now want to take Reina's newfound power for themselves, and they'll do everything in their power to get it.Torgahas more to lose now than ever before. The very existence of their universe hangs in the balance...It's time for the Devourer to bare his fangs once again.

(This is the second series set in my 'A Snake's Life' universe. Though it follows Torga & Reina, you do not need to have read the first three books to enjoy this one.)

Chapters(5 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • SparrowRRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    this series has quickly become one of my favorites. my only real complaint is that Torga ate all his friends. in the future you should bring them all back, maybe say that Fen's last evolution made him a god so he could regain his memories and he got everyone out before the end, or maybe have Torga gain the ability to make things using templates that are stored in Reina, like the souls of his friends, or the planets they lived on.
  • eric_riverRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    This novel is awesome and it’s humongous in scale
    a universe-constructing, dungeon-building, system tale
    the leads have epic backstories, introduced over time
    despite some iffy grammar, the characters are sublime
    The style is fairly standard, though it’s casual in tone
    through multiple perspectives, lots of worldbuilding is shown
    the status screens are packed with stats and look okay to me
    the casual, first-person style works well for this story
    The story is about as large in scale as one could get
    I haven’t even started to get the whole picture yet
    it seems like you don’t really need to read the prequel(?) books
    the novel’s lore is more accessible than it first looks
    The grammar is okay, but needs a bit of editing
    since the tone is light though, it’s not immersion breaking
    the exposition’s clear and dialogue is all well done
    sometimes it’s a little clunky, but it’s light and fun
    The characters are endless wells of personality
    even side characters have a unique history
    the leads’ backstories could be slightly better introduced
    but so far important details are easily deduced
    Overall this is a massive project in the works
    it’s worth looking past occasional writing style quirks
    the plot description fairly introduces what’s inside
    if you like this genre then you will be satisfied
    This is so close to a five star, but it’s not quite there
    it still needs a little cleanup, and I must be fair
    it’s full of creative twists on universe-building
    it’s a plot that has a little bit of everything    ...🐿️