The Asuran Chronicles [LitRPG, Kingdom-Building, Progression Fantasy]
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Aiden, a backwater village boy escaping the horrors of war, stumbles upon the demise of a hero. In an odd twist of fate, he is granted a Mythic artifact – theRing of Power, and is tasked to be the next hero.
Thrust into a world of opportunity and danger, Aiden must learn to utilize the artifact and gain every skill it provides for the day of reckoning, which is coming sooner than he thinks.
- Heads up, LitRPG kicks in around chapter - 5, in a overwhelming way. That point onwards, it's a smooth sailing.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- Neiryl
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 5
- Views
- 2,563
Chapters(7 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- L.E. FrenchRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Style: Initially I was drawn to this story by the quality of the writing. As I continued reading, I was not disapointed. There were several lines that I read more than once because I really loved them. The author does well with balancing exposition, worldbuilding, internal thoughts, and so on. This is solidly written and a pleasure to read.
Story: I enjoyed getting to know Aiden in the first few chapters before some bigger reveals come. There's enough action in the initial chapters to keep the story engaging. I feel like we have been set up to see a hero be born and I have faith the author can deliver.
Grammar: I didn't notice issues. It was polished.
Character: I really like Aiden and immediately rooted for him. The author quickly builds sympathy for Aiden as he starts out as an underdog and faces struggles early on. But we quickly see his potential. The dialogue is great as well and really builds his character. He has complex motivations with three dimensional emotions that make you feel immersed in his journey. Aiden is a great protagonist.
Overall, this is a promising start to what I believe will be a very exciting adventure. - Chireiden AnisnoxihRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0The story paints a picture of Aiden, a village boy who tries to escape his fate and has a terrifying encounter.This terrifying encounter changes his life as he has been given a heavy task. This fantasy is about a boy who needs to go from Zero to Hero to protect all he holds dear.
Story: The story has a fantasy setting which gets shown at the start. It shows how Aiden is making choices on how to become stronger. The story starts relatively slow as it zooms in an his thoughts and the choices he makes
Style: Easy to read, straightforward forward and clear. The scenes flow into each other naturally and logically. It takes a while for the LITRPG elements to show up and these elements could use some better spacing.
Grammar: The author has good control over the English language and errors are hard to find or aren't notable.
Character: The character has a clear drive to become stronger due to his terrifying encounter And it is fueling him butit feels as if some back story is missing. Not a lot just a little bit more would do. Anything going forward is solid as Aiden tries to figure out how to reach his goal and anything related to that is well written.