Cultivation System: Elder Edition

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[Action + System + Comedy + MC teaches protagonist disciples + Isekai + Cultivation] While I wondered why the fender of a nice Cooper was growing bigger, fate spun elsewhere, and I woke up in the body of an Elder in a world of cultivation! And, of course, there's a system: one that allows me to create any martial art that I can imagine... provided I have enough Creation Points. And my first disciple just so happens to be a reincarnated monster from 10,000 years ago with an incurable poison that I can cure with my custom creation? Hey, this can be fun--nope, it's terrifying! The reputation of the guy I took over is just... it's the worst! Not only do I have to raise disciples to earn Creation Points to raise more disciples, I also have to rehabilitate the image that not even the best PR team on Earth could rehabilitate! These really are some crappy starting circumstances...

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Status: Ongoing
Year: 2025
Author: beddedOtaku

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Rating: 4.7/ 5.0
Followers: 5,349
Views: 3,885,892

Chapters(340 total)

What readers say about Cultivation System: Elder Edition

“I'm not going to lie and say this is revolutionary and unique, but the author has a strong grasp on the genre and creating newness in a Sean of similarity. The characters are fun and well written. This novel is high quality light reading to make you feel g…”
AgedicalRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“I really enjoy the pacing of this series, it is one of the first fast paced webnovels that I feel strikes the correct balance of moving the story along quickly without it feeling like we aren't getting a proper picture painted. The MC is funny and i can see…”
Hedon_in_BlissRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(10)

AgedicalRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I'm not going to lie and say this is revolutionary and unique, but the author has a strong grasp on the genre and creating newness in a Sean of similarity. The characters are fun and well written. This novel is high quality light reading to make you feel good. It's comedy harkens to novels such as 'Does anyone actually Believes That My Master Is A Mortal?' whilst the way the main scenario is written, that a waste is raising talents, in a similar fashion to 'Heavens Library' but with the author's unique writing style.
In other words, if you like reading a poor guy getting misunderstood within an inch of his life because of the previous owner of his body whilst being surrounded by talented monsters he's forced to deal with, this novel is for you.
Hedon_in_BlissRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I really enjoy the pacing of this series, it is one of the first fast paced webnovels that I feel strikes the correct balance of moving the story along quickly without it feeling like we aren't getting a proper picture painted. The MC is funny and i can see were the relationship between him and his disciples are changing him and making him more neuanced. It is still early on in this story but I will say that I like what I am reading, I'm hoping that the main plotpoint and mc motivations/intentions will evolve and become more neuaced (AKA I hope to see the MC decide on a plan for his own development as an elder and teacher)
AuthorTetRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I'm addicted, it's so easy to read, and very entertaining. The characters feel unique and are likeable. I'm really enjoying this.
I like the approach you did with the creation of everything, you set up systems and not just bullshit(mostly) it.
I want more, keep up the good work, choom!
Brandon FosterRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Really enjoying this so far. The writing flows well, and the pacing keeps me turning pages. It’s clear the author has put a lot of thought into the world and characters. The story is engaging and easy to follow, yet deep enough to keep me hooked. Looking forward to reading more!
Thank you and keep writing
DominicmontiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It's well written and fun, a classic trope done well. the characters are funny and well written. Classic teacher system done with good humour. No real errors in grammar, worth reading. Can't think of more to say aside from wanting to see how it all pans out. But I need to write fifty words so I can finish this review
BookhermitRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
GREAT story - MC is a physical wreck AND starts with a horrific reputation. Then he is given a System designed to benefit his students (not him) of which he currently has zero, and he can only benefit based on student achievements (or occasionally by becoming a better teacher). He's weak and stays weak as his "kids" become monstrous powerhouses. Meanwhile, destiny constantly throws him and his kids into the deep end of powerhouse cultivation-world insanity - and its his job to protect them through the challenges and give them the tools to keep growing.
EyesThatWatchTheRaindropsRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I love you, author.
From a story perspective, I think it is undeniably one of the most unique cultivation novels I've read. Fights (as far as I've read them), are very well choreographed, and the figurative language used is in the best range -- not trying too hard to be unique, and enough difference within it
It is a very, very refreshing change in terms of the xianxia trope. The mc is not overpowered -- nor does he grow in strength in absurdly long frames of time -- and the pacing is relatively good for a cultivation novel.
MC also shows genuine, human characteristics -- even deep into the two hundred chapters, he's still phased by the concept of taking human life, unlike some xianxia novels where the mc becomes an emotionless killer by chapter 10. he's relatable to us as readers because he shows likeable aspects of pro-sociality . A good, altruistic character is always within the range of appreciation readers tend to show.
The characters are thoroughly fleshed out (Each disciple, and even the side characters feel real -- not just characters added to achieve a certain goal, but genuine, thinking beings. Most xianxia novels tend to just gloss over that part.)
All in all, pretty damn solid. 9/10 in my book. I'd recommend it to anyone who likes cultivation and non-overly-deep stories.
The premise of the story itself is good. I just have one complaint, maybe several.
Please. for the love of god. World building. A thorough explanation on realms, what achieving each one grants, what it takes to achieve them, more in depth explanation beyond "absorb qi and breakthrough." it doesn't have to be a giant, heavy aspect of the novel. it's just that it has been consistently surface level -- we dont know what it takes to breakthrough to spirit manifestation. or foundation establishment. we barely know that you need a "revolving core " -- whatever that is -- to reach the revolving core realm. We dont know how artifacts are made, how pills are made, how literally anything works bey
FelrexRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Such an amazing find. The characters are relatable and intelligent. The world is vast and mysterious. And the plot is the perfect mix of comedy, action/adventure, and fantasy. 6/5 stars.
Thank you for the book, I hope you keep writing it for years to come.
If you like the genre I can almost guarantee you'll enjoy this book.
Gine Umbral-WalkerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Enjoy read but the chapters are a bit short but still you should read it as I’m certain you will in enjoy it.
if you enjoy the arrogant, young master system you will probably like this one as well, and it doesn’t feel like it will suffer from the MC being stupid
HeimskrRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The narrative building in this is so much better than I expected from such an easy read.
I expected a bunch of random humor and some instant gratification face slapping etc etc...
But characters make choices and face meaningful consequences letting them have experiences.
This is the foundation of making connections with characters that is missing in all the stories that instead try to just label them 'normal' and call it good.
Come for the giggles, stay for the storytelling