My System Hates Me
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Glitches exist everywhere. Jack knows how to exploit them fully. He is asked to beta-test a newly created system. Join him as he finds glitches and exploits driving the system to insanity.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- The Sly King Kong
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 15
- Views
- 3,214
Chapters(10 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- ꜱᴀᴅ ʙᴏY ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴀɴ ᴇᴀʀ ʙᴜᴅRoyal Road★ 0.5Great, another comedian that wanted to write a story, first of the grammer needs some heavy editing as multiple mistakes were just on the first chapter and there were many mistakes, plus i feel like im reading my 3rd grade writing prompt from a child.
Secondly the MC, not the type of antihero that i like but insted is a "guy that just kinda just does what he wants" story
SPOILERS AHEAD
First when he gets his "system" it immediately gets a loop hole and not only that but i just read the firts chapter and i can't even remember how he got it in the first place.
Secondly, the plot has no coherent direction but it more goes in where the authors head is pointing at which i have no idea how this story could get in a straight line cause my brain herts every time i try to make sense of this story
Thirdly, it's just him power leveling mindlessly in the first chapter, like already he gets stat points that make no sense as he only gets them when he levels up to increase his character stats, but as ankther form of currency for some of the most godlike skills I've ever seen and thats not all but they just get exploited with ranks, i like blind fun but this is just like making the universe bensmd over just for you amd that in terne makes him get some heavy ass plot armor.
Overall good for power hungry fanatics but that's about it just mindless power leveling, not a fun read
PS. The comedy is just plain trash