Mortal Frenemies
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Two wizards must battle to the death to see which will become headmaster!
...Except they really don't want to.
A short.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Mad Sadie
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.7/ 5.0
- Followers
- 12
- Views
- 1,350
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- MK bk-201Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0Funny, little short story about the reasons for not wanting to be the deadmaster of a magic school, the students pranks turn a lot more dangerous when there is magic involved, its a thankless job, you forgot you made a blood pact that dosent let you harm your competitor, small details like that.
- CM SaltwindRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5A delightful short story with an unexpected twist and clever humor. The premise is simple, yet creative enough with a surprising amount of worldbuilding woven into the short narrative.
The dialogue flows naturally and each character have their own voice. Overall, a fun, refreshing little detour from massive epic Fantasy about heroes and villains and everything inbetween. - RznRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Love the cover art. The story was a bit dialogue heavy and a bit over the top, so while comedic it did not really capture the sort of rivalry and pettiness that seemed to be the intended tone. The effects of having small text to denote kind of a whisper or muttering was good, but the balance of dialogue tags and having some aid to better carry the tone might be what I was missing most in this piece. It was funny though, so mission accomplished!