Memoir of a Demon King

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In 2025, the System appeared on Earth, and with it, magic, aura, monsters, and portals to other worlds. In 2030, a prophecy was given about the impending arrival of a Demon King. The strongest from every nation in the world banded together and waited at the portal where the Demon King was supposed to emerge, but they never came. The portal simply closed without event, and the whole world was left perplexed. A few with sharper eyes claim to have seen a woman's silhouette in the center of the portal for a split second, but with no actual evidence, the claims were dismissed as a hoax.

23 years later, when most had forgotten about the incident entirely, the truth was finally made known, and surprisingly, it the Demon King herself who announced it. Lucille Montague, who was previously thought to be merely a piano professor with an intriguing background, revealed that she was, in fact, the Demon King, and that it was her who had emerged from the portal on that fateful day. The reveal came in the form of a memoir detailingherversion of the story of how she came to be a Demon King and what she intends to do with her power.

With no way to verify anything other than the fact that Lucille is as strong as she claims to be, the world has no choice but to believe what she wrote, but can her words be trusted? Is her storyreallythe truth, or is it only what she wants the world to believe is the truth? Is she really as peaceful and benevolent as she claims to be, or does she have something to hide?

Edit: Due to recent policy changes, I have updated the tags to only Disturbing Content, because there will be some of that. Profanity and violence will be there, but not in large enough quantities to necessitate the warning tags. There will be no sex scenes. There will be some potentially disturbing content (slavery, mental illness, mentions of rape, etc...) so I'm leaving that tag in though.

This story is a rewrite of my story,Pride, Greatest of theSins, which can also be found on Royal Road. In the original draft, I started it with 0 plans, and no idea where the story was going, so the early chapters were aimless and the later chapters suffered for it. You can go read it if you'd like, but it is unfinished, and it does contain spoilers for this story, so if you prefer an untainted reading experience, I'd advise against it. This version is more cohesive, and I actually already know how the story will end this time, so I will make fewer mistakes in the early chapters.

Chapters(21 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • SkylaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I loved the previous version, it was one of my favorites in Royal Road. Being a re-write with more direction, I'm really excited to read it, again, and anew.
    Extra points for the classical piece in the authors note of each chapter. I started listening to classical music again after a few years thanks to that. I never knew what to listen, and here is a treasure trove of options. The fact that in this version the music will be connected to each chapter makes it all the better.
    Thank you thank you thank you
  • vladeragRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    Perhaps this may not be as much of an issue for new readers, but for old readers the change to a memoir doesn't just spoil the ending of the story, but spoils the epilogue and a fair body of the main plot.  And honestly, I think that is a massive mistake.
    If you aren't afraid of spoilers, click below.
    One of the biggest things that we learn is that Lucy won't form any connections that she wants to keep enough that she would stay in her new world.  Which means either she won't make those connections or the people she connects with will die.  Given the previous story, it was more of the former than the latter, but it is worth pointing out that there is no drama involved in any of the relationships at this point.
    Another issue is that we know the system comes to Earth, which would have been a massive reveal at the end of the previous story, and the fact it is just given away at the start feels like a ruined payoff for old readers.  It also means that Lucy keeps her Demon King Class, which - given what it was doing to her head - is another reveal, because now we know she deals with it.
    Honestly, there are more, but those are the most important to me.  I do not think this story is well served by giving away the ending so easily, not when the subject material is such fertile ground for twists and turns with the plot.  In fact, even the blurbs at the start of the chapters take something away from the story, in my opinion, because I feel they reduce how seriously I can take the story - and I felt like it was a very serious story.
    In short: not a fan of the changes at all, but new readers might not mind.