Maze Breaker - LitRPG Pet Evolution
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Aceskill gained! -[Amalgamation]
[Amalgamation],Bo thought,what the hell was that?
Sounds clever,Big thought.Hopefully it’s a good skill boss, I don’t think I’m going to make it.
You’re in good acquaintance than, heh. Might as well see what it does.
“[Amalgamation]” he said with his final breath.
Something took hold of his body. It seemed that in an instant, a cold, bandage like substance wrapped itself around him from head to toe. He felt his legs grow taller and his body slimmer. A cold liquid filled his eyes, and all of a sudden he could see again. Small claws replaced his fingernails, and a large, pink tail shot out of his tailbone.
The bandage vanished, and he felt that a monster had been released.
Boss,Big said.I’m inside of you.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- The Sly King Kong
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 20
- Views
- 2,649
Chapters(6 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- FieryGalladeRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0If we're being honest, this was a rough start. The grammar leaves a lot to be desired. Normally, grammar isn't particularly important. But, it becomes important when the grammatical mistakes can affect the information flow. There were certain instances, where I was genuinely unsure, what the author was trying to convey.
The characters are fairly basic at the moment, but, I'd be interested in seeing what becomes of the main character. There are several paths the author could take with his character development, most of them fairly interesting.
With the limited material I have access to, I can't really say a lot about the story. It certainly seems unique. Though, at the moment, I can't treat the story with utter seriousness, as the whole idea of the story is rather funny to me. That could easily change in the future, though.
The style is actually pretty alright. Nothing ground-breaking, but I don't see much wrong with it. The chapter length seems reasonably consistent. The paragraphs don't seem awfully long, and the pacing feels fairly standard. I have to commend the author for not using the so-called "exposition dump" too much.
Overall, the story is pretty rough to read at the moment, but I'd keep an eye on it. This could evolve(pun not intended) into something really good, in the future.