Lost Zodiac
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Description
Book 3
As Archer and his friends find themselves ensnared, he faces a cascade of choices. Defiance courses through him, propelling him to stand against Sha’al's designs. Faced with the responsibility of freeing his captured friends from the clutches of the foe, Archer must embrace his role. Yet, the dilemma lingers—how can he abandon those he holds dear in his quest for freedom? The adventure unfolds as Archer navigates the intricate web of decisions, determined to thwart Sha'al's plans and secure the safety of those he loves.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- Emersyn Hart
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- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 5
- Views
- 987
Chapters(5 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Faylinne IceDragonRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0The review title says it all. It's a good story, just needs some work done on it. I assume this story is written in first draft only, not even seeing edits, which is 100% OK. I look forward to seeing the final product of this story if the author chooses to edit it. Great work K. A. Massey. I look forward to the second book.
Overall, the main character is interesting. At the end, you meet at least one other person who is likely to be a part of the main cast. I really like the interactions the characters have with each other. They're realistic. Eren and Isla really do seem like a dog owner and dog, even if Isla isn't a dog. The author has immense creativity for naming the ram that. I thought it was really cute that Naomi named their ram Baartholomew. It really displays that the authorr took time to develop the characters and understand who they are. Funny that the firsts one Eren meets is bonded to sheep.
Grammar was spot on, so nothing to say there.
The style is at times hard to read, however it has potential. This affects the way the story reads, but it has potential! As I said earlier, I look forward to the second book.