Kyra the Great [ LitRPG/Progression Fantasy]

Self-Published

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Description

Hailing from a manaless family of warriors, Kyra finds herself stuck in misery. However, all that changes when she kills her father and is chased out of the village by her brother.

Now being hunted, Kyra begins her new journey to discover herself and to write her name in the history books. There's just one other problem. A certain dark lord is conjuring up a horrific plan to have the continent fall on its knees before him.Follow Kyra as she evades her vengeful family, finds new friends, and faces impending doom, all in the name of a great adventure. This is Kyra the Great.What to expect from this novel:

-XP, HP and ranks will be introduced in the third chapter. Characters grow stronger through quests, training and fighting.

-Small Main Cast

-Mainly focuses on character development for all the main cast. There are plenty of action scenes within the novel.detailed world-building.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Ash Wright

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
Followers: 212
Views: 30,725

Chapters(31 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

RainyLiquidRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I saw this in the 'Others also like' section of my novel. Every time I'd go to check on my own series this would always be the first one I'd see. I usually don't read a lot, but I've been fairly bored and decided to check this out since it kept catching my eye.
I'll start with my main criticism. The beginning felt a little rushed, and jumbled. It was hard to get into the shoes of the main character, and then the big plot point happens so suddenly in chapter 2 that starts her on her quest, and had little development and room to feel impactful. There are also a few grammatical issues here and there. English is not my first language and so at times I can be really bad at reading, and there were a couple of instances where weird sentencing caused me to do a few double takes.
Now for the good.
The world building and interesting and fun to see slowly expanded. Chapters aren't tiny, and while I wish they would be bigger, they do a good job of telling the story they need to.
The real meat however is with the characters. What might have been a fairly simple and generic fantasy world is opened so much by the protagonist. While I don't like how quick the beginning was, she is a fun character, and it is nice to see how she reacts to the world around her as it expands and opens.
The plot does a good job of making you root for her quickly, and want to watch her succeed.
Overall I'd say it is a good read and I hope to see more and catch up.