Krypton Reborn: A Star Wars Story

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Description

Home destroyed by an accident of Heaven, Dan and his family have been reborn. Transported into the galaxy of his dreams, Dan, May, and their two pets, navigate family life while they change the script of the world itself.

How far will they go to protect their new home?

What fate awaits them as the future changes its shape?

Join Dan and May as they adventure through space, build a kingdom and challenge the will of the force.

Please comment with any suggestions, as well as characters you’d like to see and universes you’d eventually like to visit! We do monthly polls for content on my patreon and this novel won! It will get five chapters a week and my highest priority. Join us on patreon if you want to vote in the next poll and make sure I know what the audience is most interested in!

This fanfiction contains elements of D.C. and Marvel comics, as well as the Star Wars canon and legends universes. It will also contain things from multiple other sources, like Warhammer 40k, Invincible, various anime and movies. It can be found on my Patreon for free as well, listed as just Krypton Reborn.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: VendakSoth

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 363
Views: 419,814

Chapters(217 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

NussleserRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
After Reading to the current stoping point in this story it started to really grow on me even if the start had some medium hickups. Especially the character Mai has developed to the end nicely from a side character with horrible one liners about pokemon to someone essential to the progress of the story. I hope the author will return soon, the last statement was about extended break of months to polish the story and i appreciate that but it's now over a year and i am hungry for more.
SetelRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The store has a lot of potential the grammar is great the character seems more realistic and it gets right to the point I hate when stories take too long to get the reincarnation's part part too much but this one gets right to it quickly has an okay backstory nothing extremely new but still different so tldr the story is something that has a lot of potential and I hope to see more of it in the future. 😀👍
darkrikeRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Edit —-This is totally readable if you want something simple. 5/5 stars on that-
I like the premise. The idea is there and is interesting. It is a wish fulfillment but it seems that the author wants to make a story. Due it is slightly too much wish fulfillment.
The grammar is also excellent so it is totally readable.
The thing about the story is that it is too flippant and too abrupt with its actions and interactions within. It is like the author is too eager to tell his story and thus instead of a story, it becomes the telling of several scenes.
Basically, things are just happening instead of being explored or developed. And thus the story is not refined.
So, the author needs to calm down, or slow down, and grow his story. Or at least add some paragraphs and sentences to make to story flow more.
It might become better further in the story which is what I hope. But right now the story gives me a headache.
It is totally readable
Edit-
When it gets going it becomes better
Still the beginning needs editing