Into the Realm: The Chronicles of Carter Blake, Book I
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Fourteen year-old college student, Carter Blake, aspires to become a Nobel Prize winning physicist until the night the villain from his favorite tabletop role playing game shows up in person and turns his life upside down. Drawn into the setting of BattleHammer, he begins a journey of self-discovery and learns his destiny is much different than he expected. Carter faces many challenges in the realm of BattleHammer. First, he's blinded while watching an angel fight an eldritch abomination. Then his new friend, a warrior princess, is abducted, so he sets out with a half-dragon warrior and a half-elf mage to rescue the princess. After regaining his sight, Carter discovers he has the ability to peer a few seconds into the future. Some claim he is a Walker of Worlds, a man with immense powers. Is he? More important, can he end a war caused by his own avatar from BattleHammer?
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- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- RwFoster
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 39
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- 5,612
Chapters(13 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- John Stax (Fobywoby)Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0Overall Impression:
An intriguing fantasy novel with strong world-building and character development. Engaging plot and dynamic characters make it a worthwhile. RwFoster has crafted a compelling start to what promises to be an epic series.
STYLE:
Vivid and immersive fantasy world. The author deftly balances detailed descriptions with action, painting a rich tapestry that draws readers into the Realm. Liked the BattleHammer bit. The style effectively conveys the epic scope and complexity of the story.
STORY:
Engaging and filled with twists that keep readers invested. Carter Blake’s journey to the Realm, where he encounters mythical creatures and powrful allies, is cool. The stakes are high. It mixes personal growth with broader conspiracies.
GRAMMAR:
The grammar is generally solid, but there are occasional errors and awkward phrasings that detract from the reading experience. Some dialogue feels stilted, particularly when characters switch between formal and colloquial speech. Additionally, the punctuation is sometimes inconsistent, affecting the clarity of certain passages. Despite these issues, the author's command of language is evident, and the narrative remains understandable and engaging. A thorough edit could polish these rough edges, enhancing the overall readability of the book.
CHARACTER:
Carter Blake is a relatable protagonist, struggling with his newfound powers and responsibilities while maintaining a sense of humor. Angriz and Dearbhaile are well-rounded characters with rich distinct personalities. Their interactions are dynamic and often humorous, adding depth. The characters' growth and evolving relationships drive the story forward, making readers care about their fates.
Overall, worth giving it a read!