Illusion
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Hello everyone, I have taken down Illusion, as I have now published the book and cannot keep more than 10% of it posted anywhere else. Thank you everyone for all the reads and comments. I hope you all enjoy the finished product!
https://www.royalroad.com/amazon/B07WRPJHZK?maas=&ref=
Information
- Status
- Ongoing
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Gorilladin
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 4
- Views
- 527
Chapters(5 total)
Reviews
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Community Reviews(5)
- DaraichRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Really like this story. It's an unique story here on RoyalRoadl and well writen. Can't wait for the next chapters.
- TheShadowOfZamaRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I don't often leave these kinds of advanced reviews, but I like to think that when I do, it is well deserved.
This story is a great LitRPG, especially when you look at what is often the norm for LitRPG stories here on RoyalRoad and on other sites. This story in my opinions soars way over 95% of the LitRPG stories on this site and those on the internet as a whole.
Style: Nothing particularly interesting to say I think. It's good, nothing that irked me personally. It reads very pleasantly and the author does not like using cliffhangers, which is a big plus in my opinion. You can read this story and feel content with how it ended.
Grammar: English is not my native language, but I like to think myself as being fairly well versed in it. I can say with certainty that the grammar is definitely good enough that you will need to put a lot of effort in finding vocabulary mistakes and major grammar mistakes. I am not a master in the English language, but I can say with certainty the grammar is more than good enough.
Story: Very, very good. The MC and his companions all have their own worries that drive them forth. Whilst the real world isn't really explored a lot, I personally find it to be explored just enough to make the reader care about it. I very much understood Kurt's real life problems with his parents and I think readers who have been in a similar situation know exactly how heavy of a weight those problems can throw upon a person. Though Kurt's real life problems aren't often referred to, I never forgot they existed and neither did Kurt.
This is a normal LitRPG, meaning that the characters don't have to worry about dying, they don't even stand to lose a lot in terms of equipment and/or experience in most cases. At first the game is nothing more than a way for Kurt, our main character (MC) to reconnect with his friend Jimmy whom he had to leave behind for college and to get his mind off of the fact he dropped out of college.
Jimmy is stuck in a wheelchair for life, beca - Thedoctor1787Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0So much to like about this. Great story especially if you're like me, and burnt yourself out on fantasy litrpg. Does a really good job weaving just enough game elements to keep it interesting. All without bogging it down with half page stat sheets and nonsensical percentages. The action scenes are vivid and exciting, and somehow not game breaking. The characters could use some fleshing out, but are still fun and engaging. All things considered one of the best I've read on RR.
- NeoMareRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5It is truly an enticing story, one of the best I have read in this site. The grammar is not perfet, but really close to it.
- TerriblyVileRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5I like it please keep writing this amazing story!