Era'Lis

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Troubled by the memories of another, Vyrian struggles to find his place in life.

(no this is not a reincarnation story)

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I'm still new to writing so constructive critiscism as well as notifications of incorrect grammar, spelling and weirdly written sentences are welcome.

Also, a bad habit of mine is making a storytoofast paced. What should span several chapters takes a few paragraphs. I see some other authors here do it and it irks the hell outta me so please tell me if I lapse into this habit as well.