Earth's Alpha Prime (a LitRPG System Survival)

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Revamped version of Volume 1, 2 & 3 are now available onKindle Please note that Only the first 30 chapters of the Revamped Volume 1 are available here. From Chapter 31 to Chapter 100, the chapters in this novel are from the first draft. The earlier chapters were initially written in a first-person perspective and later transitioned to third-person omniscient for a more cohesive narrative style. I hope you enjoy the revamped version! Jay, a young mixed martial arts trainer, never expected his life to change in an instant. Picked by the mysteriousSystemas one of Earth’s elevenAlpha Chosen, he is thrust into theTrial Program. It's a brutal intergalactic challenge that sends him to theTrial World, a deadly planet overrun by monstrous creatures. To survive the horrors of the Trial World, the Alpha Chosen must fight, adapt, and grow stronger. Jay, however, possesses aunique talent, a game-changing ability that allows him to grow faster and stronger than anyone else. Rising rapidly through the ranks, he carves his path to the top of the Trial World’s hierarchy. Watch as Jay rises to the top and claims his position as the ALPHA PRIME among the millions of Alpha Chosen across the Milky Way Galaxy. ╭── ⋅ ⋅ ── ✩ ── ⋅ ⋅ ──╮ [TheSystemis assimilatingEarthwith the rest of the vastUniverse.] [Congratulations! You are one of the11 Chosenindividuals out of7.8 billionfor theAlpha Program.] [As one of the 11 chosen members of the Alpha Program, you will be among thefirstfrom your planet to embark on theTrial Program.] [When the Trial Program concludes,Earth's assimilationwith theUniversewill commence. Your mission is tosurvive, overcome thedangers, and growstronger. Best of luck to you.] ╰── ⋅ ⋅ ── ✩ ── ⋅ ⋅ ──╯ Book Cover: Dall-E Generated Art, based on a scene in Volume 3. Hi there! I’m MN, the Author of theOMNOS REDUXSeries,a story that spans 4 Mega Books (~750 Chs), with each having two or more Side Stories (~100 Chs). The adventure begins with "EARTH’s ALPHA PRIME," the first step in a journey that has seen me grow as an author along the way. In my books, you’ll find interesting abilities, a well-designed system, consistent LitRPG elements, and well-thought-out fight sequences. If you enjoy stories that combine survival, world-building,LitRPGelements,OverPowered MCand a fresh take on theSystem, then this series is for you. I’d like to give you a fair warning—this is a power fantasy. The protagonist becomes OP real quick. If that’s not your thing, no hard feelings, but this novel may not be for you. Please don't go and give low ratings based on that alone. If you don't vibe with it, it's totally okay to let it be—no need for any pettiness. However, if youareinto power fantasies and enjoy seeing characters grow into something unstoppable, then you're in for a treat. By joining me onPatreon, other than theAdvanced Chapters, you have the exciting opportunity to customise various aspects of the series, including,Equipment,Skills,MonstersandSupportive/Minor/Major Characters. You can make aone-timepurchase for this in the shop section ofPatreon. Your support helps me bring these stories to life and share them with readers everywhere. Thank you for considering joining me. I’m excited to share theOMNOS REDUXSerieswith you! Any support is highly appreciated and will allow me to keep updating the story! I’ve been working on significantly enhancing the earlier chapters of this story. When I started three years ago, my writing wasn't as descriptive or engaging as it is now, and I left quite a few loopholes. Many of you have been kind enough to point out grammatical errors and story gaps, and I’m committed to addressing those. There won’t be any changes to the plot, just massive improvements in quality and the visual appeal of the system notifications. For those who have just started reading this book, if you choose to continue with the regular chapters, please bear with the lower quality or consider waiting for the REVAMPED versions to be released. Alright then, Cheers! Happy Reading! Chapter Release Rate: 4 Chs/Week. <<<< Mon, Wed, Fri, Sat >>>> Patreon:patreon.com/c/MN_1223 my planfor EARTH’s ALPHA PRIME (Book 1 of OMNOS REDUX Series[ORS]) {~ Estimated around 900 Chapters} Total Volumes: 7 Volume 1: Survival Arc {Ch.1 to Ch.100} Volume 2: Tournament Arc {Ch.101 to Ch.234} Volume 3: Obelisk Acquisition Arc {Ch.235 to Ch.372} Volume 4: Bloodline Realm Arc {~ Estimated around 125 Chapters} Volume 5: Earth Assimilation Arc {~ Estimated around 125 Chapters} Volume 6: Universe Expedition Arc {~ Estimated around 125 Chapters} Volume 7: Annihilator Arc {~ Estimated around 125 Chapters} End of the[ORS]Book 1

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Status: Ongoing
Year: 2024
Author: MN_1223

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Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
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What readers say about Earth's Alpha Prime (a LitRPG System Survival)

“So a lot of people have bad things to say about this as of up to chapter 7 and it is not what it seems don't judge the book based on it's first few chapters this is what happens to 90% of the good books out there anyways this is a good novel it's interestin…”
Death-69Royal Road5.0 / 5
“although the plot was too fast and our MC is too OP. everything else is lovely creation very few can have.the actual problem is the MC OPness and the lack of "logical challeges"and i LOVE the Plot you can imagine it hapenning in reality.over all this is sup…”
category 3Royal Road5.0 / 5

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Death-69Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So a lot of people have bad things to say about this as of up to chapter 7 and it is not what it seems don't judge the book based on it's first few chapters this is what happens to 90% of the good books out there anyways this is a good novel it's interesting and unique if you get as far as I am(chapter 133 on webnovel) you'll be hooked and that's a fact it's fun and interesting enough and although it might seem generic at first it gets better trust me the mc isn't power hungry to the point where he forgets his fellow humans I don't want to spoil it but it gets interesting up the line
category 3Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
although the plot was too fast and our MC is too OP. everything else is lovely creation very few can have.the actual problem is the MC OPness and the lack of "logical challeges"and i LOVE the Plot you can imagine it hapenning in reality.over all this is suppose to be 4.5 star but i wanna support the author by reviewig 5 star.i hope the author can do more that what it is now and to not degrade.thank you and happy new year author.
Mamut22Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I think this has great potencial. Interesting system ;) although little bit too fast and no real back story I dont expect it to have it this soon. I am looking forward what is earth reaction and first interplanet interaction I asume real backstory starts there.
Good job keep at it ;)
WistiwasiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The story is good and well written despite the author not having English as their first language. Those that criticized the author for that reason don't seem to be smart enough to realize this,or maybe they're just shite disturbers. I know from personal experience that creative writing is not as easy as one may think
Frog CultRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I’m not very good at analyzing plot or similar things, but I do believe that if it’s the genre you enjoy the only complaint one could have about this book is the characters and some of their lack of depth. The author I think is currently getting a lot better at this but in the early chapters before rewrite it was a bit uninteresting but I’m sure is much better now.
NickXenixRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The story is decent, above average plot that is interesting and unique enough to keep you entertained, but not perfect levels of novelty.What's unreasonable is all the reviews, you can notice how all the bad reviews didn't even get through 10 chapters while all the good reviews are above 20 chapters, there's even a 2.5 star review at chapter 1 because they didn't like the author's word choice.This is the perfect example of judging a book by it's cover.And all the negative reviews get flooded with likes while all the positive reviews get the opposite, I honestly wouldn't be surprised if someone made alts to review bomb this.The grammar is bumpy but atleast I still know what's going on, haters and trolls out there, I know you're gonna spam dislikes with your alts on my review, so feel free to do it.And I'll still be here reading this decent story.
CyanRiceRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The plot was severely lacking, and far to slow. Chapter 100 for 7 days is way to slow. Then you pull that thing with preponing everything and it just makes me cringe. The characters I liked but there were too many of them.The whole plot after the alpha was just severely cringy. There wasn't really any substance to this at all. I'm not sure what you could do during a rewrite to fix it honestly, maybe not wait 18 months and give some people early access?The grammar was good atleast and didn't have very many errors. The monsters were weak, and the MC progressed to fast so there wasn't really much challenge. Honestly not quite sure if he really earned that power either. Overall 6/10. Not sure I would read it again given the chance if I knew how bad it was.What was your inspiration for writing this? It seems like a worse version of rise of the winter wolf, but everything you didn't like about it you changed.Gotta put more words somehow, so I'll go on. Gave lots of completely unnecessary details like how many titles he had that he couldn't use, I felt that the characters motivation was to forced. If some other character that didn't have siblings got would they be equals? No the one without them would probably be stronger.
CrydenRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I enjoyed my time with Earth's Alpha Prime. I read all the way up to chapter 203 in only a couple days. I think the author has taken a lot of time to think about a pretty solid system-world, and the writing reflects that.The story is well thought out, with quite a few moving parts. There are a few plot-related mistakes that I noticed, along with a couple of times the story's rules were broken, so I dropped my score a bit for that. The characters are interesting, if somewhat two-dimensional, and although some fall into relative clichés, they're still enjoyable to read. Grammar is fine, some mistakes, but nothing egregious or unreadable.The story DOES require quite a suspension of disbelief, even within the bounds of a fantasy. Like others, I find that the MC tends to get exactly what he wants/needs all the time, whether from the system or others. All the characters not in the main cast, and even some within it, are often reduced to fodder for the MC's progression. The MC's abilities are also almost all unlocked within a very short time, with him gaining such a ridiculous amount of strength and number of abilities that the author completely stops dealing with them. This is only bothersome because initially, it seems like that would be an integral part of the story, but by chapter 100 or so it's completely glossed over. The overall power-balance of things isn't well established early on, and we can't appreciate how flabbergastingly OP the MC's powers are. I was able to overlook all that though, in favor of my interest in the plot and world. Overall, if you enjoy stories with OP protagonists with slightly questionable morals who kick butt and take names, this is one for you!EDIT @ CH320The above mostly still applies. However, I noticed a massive reduction in chapter length, with a large bump in "padding" (along the lines of "the walls were red" with sometimes the very next sentence being "red is the color the walls were"). The major timeskip was also pretty jarring, ski
Nim SkollRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Although at the time of this it is on hiatus its still a good read.Most problems people have with this slowly get solved or explained in a way to make you understand why the MC is so robotic.The beginning was admittedly a bit rough but I like what I've read since then. Give it a try to at least the tournament arc.Would love to come back and read more, hopefully the author comes back either to continue or rewrite this to better address other peoples concerns.
MZeroRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I would say that I like the system and how it operates and other things about his talent. My issue is that there was no suspense because it seems like he always got what he wanted and it was not the same for anyone else just him. I don't like when all of a sudden MC is able to manipulate people around it's like the rest are not capable at all. he asks for the guy's talent and he just tells him. The first 11 chosen should be as capable as him if not more so in certain aspects. But what made me stop reading is that he cares about no one else but his family and because his family faced some hardship and not many people helped his family he allowed to be a jackass to everyone because they owe his family. It's as if People out there are not having their own hardship.But when he meets someone in a similar situation as him and has faced more hardship than him what does he do he manipulates and tries to take advantage of him. At that moment he became no different to me then the people who came after his family. Had he just asked for help and helped him get stronger in return it could have been the start of a strong friendship. or they could have come to some kind of deal. It seems to me that MC is headed in a direction where all cares about is himself because in his head his the only person who has faced hardship and no one else has. That whole plot point about his family hardship is overdone and having Mc overcome these hardships without just blaming people for not helping and going on about others not deserving help from him is just a behavior I expect from a spoiled child. Had he just protected his family and helped those who stood by him or helped those who had done him no wrong, would have been fine. But no he is acting like a young Master who got faced slapped and is about to overreact.