Deadly Sins of Zombies world

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Description

Did you ever imagine yourself at the start of the zombie apocalypse?The protagonist was unlucky, and he met this unpleasant event while behind bars.But it's not all that bad. The universe has given him a superpower that puts him far above other people.How will he act? Will he become a hero? I don’t think so. Will he save people? It may well be.Or maybe he will blow his socks off and he will start killing everyone right and left? Who knows...

Author’s Notes:

An unconventional realRPG!The book will include blood, sex, violence, murder and other aspects that reflect the author’s sick fantasy. So I warn you that moralists shouldn't read this novel:)

And so.... Just read and have fun :)

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Serge_Eagle

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Followers: 9
Views: 4,003

Chapters(11 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

Little RacoonRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Although not the most innovative story on the planet, the author delivers on the premise to create a rather action-packed zombie apocalypse similar to those in the movies.
Style: 3.5/5. There seems to be more telling of the story from the protagonist's POV which makes it feel less visceral than what the author was probably going for, but there is a marked improvement over each chapter.
Story: 4/5. Nothing particularly special with a strong man gathering survivors and trying to live through the apocalypse while searching for his family. However, that's not to say it was bad, as the story as a whole flowed decently well without unnecessary hiccups in the way.
Grammar: 3/5. This is the author's weakest section. Dialogue tags are a bit hard to follow, and there are some phrases that lack proper punctuation. The punchy grammar helps set the rough tone, but other than that, it doesn't really do much to help the story. A quick comb can go a long way.
Character: 4/5. Matt is your typical strong male protagonist. Though this is a rather simple character setup, it allows the author to create some interesting interactions between him and the other characters. Nothing in particular that was 'wow'-worthy, but that doesn't mean there was anything bad as well. The author simply played it very safe.
Overall, a pretty decent story that's been hindered by the grammar, but the author definitely didn't pull any punches after issuing the warning at the very beginning.
Maeve_LindleyRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
(Read to chapter 3)
the descriptions and action so far is great. The only issue I can see is the inconsistent speech/dialogue it is very heard to follow the (- speech -) with dash marks in the first chapter it is a little all over with some Speach marks and dashes. Ensure you stick to one form and to make it easier on readers use speech marks.