The Beginning of The End (New Version)

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New Synopsis/Description:

When allowed to explore a new world. What Yuuto foresaw becomes unpredictable, for when the clouds burn with all the fuel in their veins. Tales from across existence will appear. What shows, tells. What tells, shows. Yuuto is wandering the paths that arise as he travels. For fantasy is not romance.

Note: all cover are made by AI image.

What it has - are completely random such as;

Graphic Violence, Profanity, Sensitive Content, Sexual Content, ECT. There would be some sex & brutal scenes. I would do my best to balance it.

-Harem & Romance, there would be a lot. I would do my best to make it reasonable.

-Slice of Life & Multiple Lead Characters, focusing more to the story & characters.

-Mythos, I got inspired by a lot of them. So, you'd see a lot. Some reasonable & unreasonable.

Note: chapters are kinda fix. I waste so much time making it readable and good. So, if it is still flawless I would like your suggestion. I do not want to waste any more time. Only time I'd fix any of my chapters would be when once per arc/volume is completely, then fix it again when the story is complete. I have other fiction I want to write.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2023
Author
T-Dog

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICFEMALE LEADSUPERNATURALSLICE OF LIFEMULTIPLE LOVERSROMANCE SUBPLOTSTRONG LEADMALE LEADMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSNON-HUMAN LEADPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAIREINCARNATIONHIGH FANTASYMYTHOSURBAN FANTASYPROGRESSIONTIME TRAVELTIME LOOPSUPER HEROES

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
11
Views
8,528

Chapters(8 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • blugailRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Okay, so the grammar is bad... and there's a lot I could tear this story down on, But...
    Well, for research lately I've been reading a lot of AI... with perfect grammar and well-crafted details and all that, but without any sort of love. This is the exact opposite of that.
    It's raw; I know EXACTLY what the writer meant when he wrote this. That's something you can't really teach. Anthony doesn't care what you think of him; he's not selling us a bill of goods. Everything from talking about the bible... to fear of death... to gender insecurity... we're a getting a real person's real emotions. And I think that's a rare and wonderful commodity.
  • cursedclarkeRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Beginning of the End is not a novel. It’s not even a proper story yet. It’s a metaphysical scream, an existential diary, and a 51-page confessional that accidentally puts God in a stat block and then rebirths a sad anime dropout as a magic baby. It’s also kind of brilliant. Like, infuriatingly brilliant. But buried under layers of clutter, formatting disasters, lore monsoons, and the literary equivalent of someone interrupting their own monologue to do a Fortnite dance mid-Bible study.
    Let’s start with the writing, which is a beautiful mess. Grammar-wise, this thing is hanging on by threads. There are missing punctuation marks, unnecessary capitalizations, inconsistent verb tenses, and formatting choices that make it feel like the text itself is yelling at you in tongues. The pacing is chaotic. Whole chapters stop the story just to infodump about the nature of reality, creation, duality, and theology using enough references to make a college philosophy professor weep and then drop out. That would normally be a death sentence. And yet… here I am. Reading the whole thing. Because underneath the mess is someone trying, really trying, to say something. You told me about the grammar, you knew what was coming.
    Iska, the protagonist, is a mess of contradictions, but in a good way. He’s not some overpowered fantasy vessel with no personality. He’s emotional, insecure, awkward, and full of real fear and curiosity. His reactions, screaming at angelic beings, wondering if he’s going to get showered as a baby, bargaining with divine power like a nerd who just unlocked cheat codes, are genuinely relatable. He’s not pretending to be the hero. He’s just trying not to embarrass himself. It’s surprisingly human. Gabriel, the angelic guide-slash-lore dispenser, is also a standout. He’s what you’d get if you took a biblical seraph and made him your older brother who thinks you’re annoying and still helps you out anyway. His energy shifts between celestial authority and annoyed barista