The Arcanist Seer

Self-Published

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Description

An eyeofwhich sees everything beyond the skies and heavens saw an embodying fate with reek of blood and greed.

He who sees the future and yet is restrained by his own shackles of his destiny.

An eye that serves a purpose but nothing in exchange for his freedom.

Will he remain as a tool of his adversary or escape from his own shackles of fate?

This is a story of two old men trying to free from the shackle of their destiny set in a future only to await their impending doom. This is a story of a dead god, and of a storyteller, trying to break from the bonds of the past. And as their stories go, one of them will face the events that unfold in their distant past, as the other one will unveil its mystery predicted by its future.

Is it a mistake to challenge fate, after all?

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The world-building is set upon on the universal scale, with dungeon and old-style fantasy. It has a progression that follows with the consistency of a dungeon setting, although it's not what you call a dungeon, but a function of a crystal. There's a lot to take in this novel, but that's all within my intention. I have always enjoyed challenging conventional ideas.

The cover is not mine, it's just temporary.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: FatherGramp

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 15
Views: 6,489

Chapters(13 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

MaeMellyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Grammar is fine but some part of its aren't well understood, and some punctuations are kinda messy but the style fits well with it. It needs a little bit of editing.
Now with the story, the prologue was spectacular, I can already see where's it going which proves that you have put a lot of thought of it, making those chapter consistent with the story your going with.
While for the character building, while its too early to say it, but I can say the idea of philosophy you added in the prologue makes a really good capture of the story itself.
Though I'm not sure, but your story challenges some conventional ideas out there in terms of cultivation which is bold for you to add. So kudos for that.
So overall its not bad, though you need to pay attention for your style since some of the vocabulary you used might not be so endearing for most of the viewers out there. Just helping a buddy out in a open here, keep it up.
Maybe in time i might do a review again and might change my opinion from not bad to good, but considering your still new and with the limited chapters, it's too early for that.