Slime Girl

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Description

Slimes are stupid!Annoying little pests that don't think about anything.How would they? They don't even have a brain.They don't even think about what they do, dissolving anything in their reach.That's worse than a beast acting on instinct, that's just following a program.A plague of mindless balls of goo.If it were up to me they should all get eradicated.At least that’s what I thought.Until my life was turned into a mess. Stupid slimes!

Information

Status: Ongoing
Year: 2020
Author: expentio

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 626
Views: 851,379

What readers say about Slime Girl

“While the first few chapters are a bit odd, but afterwords it became something I binged. I just really like our two main characters, the way they internal monologue, the slime part, and the shenanigans. The story is good, the supporting characters are mostl…”
Sleepy ThomasRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“This one has got me hooked, the narrative is pretty interesting cool twists and interesting endearing characters, interesting world building from the perspective of Rakis, grammer is clean and understandable, as our author is not a native English speaker i…”
ArmitageRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(10)

Sleepy ThomasRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
While the first few chapters are a bit odd, but afterwords it became something I binged. I just really like our two main characters, the way they internal monologue, the slime part, and the shenanigans. The story is good, the supporting characters are mostly good, the grammar is fine other than that some people might be thrown off by having the character's name at the end of dialogue. It didn't bother me though. Overall, I would highly suggest at least giving this a try.
ArmitageRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This one has got me hooked, the narrative is pretty interesting cool twists and interesting endearing characters, interesting world building from the perspective of Rakis, grammer is clean and understandable, as our author is not a native English speaker i have to hand congratulations on an amazing job, i highly recommended this series if you enjoy a story from the perspective of a recently turned non human mc, a journey of trauma, body horror and friendship and self discovery, and a shout out to Expentio's other works most of which take place in a shared world of Ea, a very interesting fantasy setting world 🌎 Formecia, Arachne, and fairytale over on scribblehub By saril in cooperation with our beloved author here, Thank you for these amazing storytelling experiences ❤️ I'm a big fan now lol looking forward to continuing to read your books 📚, keep up the good work friend 🧡
MidoriMasamuneRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Currently on Chapter 73 and took a pause to type this. Loving it so far, the internal monologue and thought processes are so well written, not to mention believable, and they go a long way in my enjoyment of this so far. It is rare that internal monologues cause me to stop and think, and combined with the fact that they are appropriately placed, and not longer than required, is an even rarer trait. Half the time I dont even notice any minor mistakes in spelling, or somewhat awkward word choices, as the writing as a whole flows so well, that I generally dont have time for my mind to get stuck on such small details, and let me reiterate, any mistakes in spelling and somewhat odd (but usually still grammatically correct, if sometimes a bit uncommonly used) word choices, are just that, SMALL. The storytelling is phenomenal for being posted freely on the internet (if ever publish on kindle, I wouldn't mind a review copy.), any errors are easily caught by potential proofreaders, and the depth to the characters and their internal motivations are steps above most of what is on this site. 5/5 as of ch 73 (9.25-9.5/10 as lets be honest, no work EVER written has been perfect, and reviews are subjective to the taste of the individual reader)
blacky-42Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Interessting and original story concept.
The two main characters are very lively and defined. Since there was not much of interaction with side characters I'm not certain but they seemed a bit flat.
Since the story is just starting I'm looking forward to where we are heading.
TNT_GOLEMRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The early chapters are still a bit rough around the edges but the story is amazing!
The plot is nicely tied together from arc to arc and flows very well
The characters, wile mostly focusing on the non-human leads, are still very relatable in so many ways, and are very well written. The characters' actions almost always (about 99.99% of the time, allowing a bit of a margin of error) fit how they where written.
The story really makes me interested in learning more about the world that it takes place in
I can't wait to read more from this and other stories from this world!
HansHeeringRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
This story is presented in a relatively lightearted way, but what is really told is hardcore.
The Plot begins with a slime, that kidnaps a young woman and forcibly turns her into another slime. The original slime is aboslutely obsessively fixated on the slime turned woman, making her the center of her live, and following nearly every order of the MC.
Therefore while the plot and style are nicely written and I haven't found any grammatical flaws in the story, it is too dark for me to truly enjoy.
j03manRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I would give this fiction a 4 star review but the story reads like a Japanese novel put through google translate with no editing.
Very hit or miss, very annoying to read. World building is ok, characters aren't just empty vessels for the story, style overuses japanese webnovel tropes that pad out the word count without adding anything.
CeramicMugRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
"It's got an interesting premise, and an extremely weak start. It's got that style of writing where instead of adding tags in sentences that can convey emotion, like he scowled or she gritted out through her teeth, instead speakers are labeled with parenthesis" (ceramicmug)A bit lackluster in the grammar too. The formatting was also extremely strange, lumps of paragraph with no spacing then 4 spaces then dialogue with parenthesis then when finished with dialogue it's all internal monologue and telling the reader exactly what they should be taking from xyz instead of simply describing. Extreme case of telling with no showing. I was intrigued for what might come, but the writing isn't strong enough for me to continue past ... half the first chapter. I hope expentio rewrites this when they have stronger writing skills.As is, I can't handle the dialogue then exposition then dialogue cycle.
EhlionneyRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Look, the story isn't bad, the grammar is a little bit awkward sometimes but it's acceptable, the concept of the story is interesting, the characters are cute and likeable
But
And this is an extreme but
I find it absolutely UNBEARABLE that Shari never even ATTEMPTS to tell Liqu how she feels about things.
It's absolutely ridiculous, unbelievable, and immersion breaking, that when Liqu asks something like "are you ok" that Shari just awkwardly says "no" rather than, y'know, something like
"Hell no I'm not ok, you kidnapped me, you murdered me, you brought me back as a monster, you stole my entire future from me, you took away my ability to ever live with my family again, you forced me to spend the rest of my life hiding from humans, and you never gave me a choice about any of this. How could I ever be ok?"
And like, I get that Liqu is a slime so she doesn't know these things, but she WOULD know them if Shari ever bothered to say them. And nobody would ever be so calm in such a situation as to sit there and think "logically" about whether she would understand, no, they would say it anyways even if they thought she wouldn't understand, because that's how emotions work.
Like I said, this could be a great story for all I know. But this problem is an absolute deal breaker for me and even if some people are able to ignore it, I think the writer should seriously stop and fix this before screwing it up in any of their future writing, because it's just wrong. Like, how can you fail so horribly at having your main characters communicate with each other? And if it's done on purpose to force conflict and misunderstandings then that's even worse
To quote Zoidberg from Futurama, "your interpersonal communication is bad and you should feel bad"
Skeleton KingRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
4.5 stars if not for the Character of Elin which ruins everything including but not limited to MC's relationships with the adventure group, her safety, her ideology, her morals causing her to kill without purpose etc. She also introduced forced/ unnecessary conflict in the MC's life. Despite all of this she is probably going to become their best friend.
If Liqu killed her after Cid's assassination it would have been fine but she let a threat to her precious MC live why because the plot demands it. She should have killed Elin when they first met.
I really want to like this story but sometimes one character ruins an entire story, in this case it is Elin. She breaks the flow of the story taking it away ftom its core theme which I presume is '' No matter your past or your appearance, you can still become/ be a good person with a human heart." Either its theme is that or " If you stalk and obsess over someone they will eventually reciprocate your feelings even if you caused them mental, emotoinal and physical trauma. "