Lord of Sins

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Description

After living a life full of controversies. Ethan Edwards finds himself reincarnated into the world of 'Lord of The Mysteries'.There is, however, a grand twist, as different from others in this world, he isn't directly subjected to all of its laws. With a soul, corrupted by the most powerful 'Sins' of 'Hell', he'll try to become the most powerful Beyonder in existence, and rid this world of its horrifying madness. NO MATTER THE PRICE.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: YunokRyuk

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Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 25
Views: 14,713

What readers say about Lord of Sins

“This is surprisingly good for the typical premise. The heartfelt scenes are horrifying, the worldbuilding is sufficient, the characters are moving, if a tad dramatic, the descriptions are vivid if sometimes a little awkward, and it's a very enjoyable read…”
AcrawRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“Hello. I would definitely continue reading. I am very curious how he actually develops. But besides that the beginning and interim felt very convoluted. At some point there were two different Battles going on. Trying to figure out what is real and what is n…”
JavaresRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(3)

AcrawRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is surprisingly good for the typical premise. The heartfelt scenes are horrifying, the worldbuilding is sufficient, the characters are moving, if a tad dramatic, the descriptions are vivid if sometimes a little awkward, and it's a very enjoyable read for the average webnovel fan.
The style tends to move like a horror or tragedy story, and that's kind of the case for a time, if perhaps not the case in the future, and it's overall decent. The grammar has no major flaws.
So, far, we're only in the introduction and the effort is going to be maintain the story beats throughout the course, a struggle many webnovel writers fail in.
If I were to give a recommendation, I would merely suggest more editing to smooth out the rough details in the story. I would also increase his number of metaphors and descriptions while streamlining them, perhaps get a book and write them down throughout your day as they come to you, but you're doing very well here.
I just have a concern about theming is all. There don't seem to be any direct, strong themes, which isn't necessary to include, but they're nice. Dostoevsky was a master of this art.
Will update review as I read further.
JavaresRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Hello.
I would definitely continue reading. I am very curious how he actually develops.
But besides that the beginning and interim felt very convoluted.
At some point there were two different Battles going on. Trying to figure out what is real and what is not all the while trying to make sense of the characters past and his own role in it.
Granted i listen to these stories while doing other activities but still... I felt like I had to be a detective with a pen and paper trying to pinpoint the story line.
Gore i don't mind though the first gore scene did give me some goosebumps.
Besides that. Keep it up. It's still a tiny baby of a story so I can't even judge it fully.
KLeo GertsRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The Beginning’s End is a unique fantasy novel, grief, transformation, and the fragile line between humanity and monstrosity. The main character, Caelus Thorne, a boy who doesn't have proper memories of his family, and even his health is so bad that he will die after a few years.
The atmosphere in which this book truly shines is drenched in gothic melancholy, which is because of how the scenes are played. In the beginning arc, we walk through an amusement park where the main character's thirteenth birthday turns to a grave, and how he revisits it with his one and only friend and the scenes that happened to him. The imagery of the scenes is mainly haunting and cinematic.
The characters, meanwhile, are intelligent; though volume 1 didn't have that many characters introduced, the small number of characters have high intelligence. Caelus is not a shonen protagonist; he is fragile yet cunning, broken yet unyielding. His path to descent into villainy is not because he wants to be edgy or something; he has many reasons to, and to know that, just read the novel and know about it. The side characters like Uriel, Aeren, Aiven, and Zelus are all important characters; they have their own personality and way of talking, Aeren being mysterious, along with Aiven, despite being a friend of the main character.
Stylistically, the writing can easily tell what is going on in the story, despite it being confusing if one were to miss a paragraph or sentence, and in some places it is not properly understandable, and it may be due to the author's first time writing. But it is very descriptive.
And overall, this is a perfect novel to read if one wants to read a progression, dark fantasy, revenge, and mystery.