Rise of the Red Dragon Emperor : Book 1

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I thought starting college would be a good opportunity for a huge step up in my personal life and it was but not the way I expected it. It turns out that I'm a Red Dragon which makes me infamous and despised in the magic world, even by other Red Dragons. It doesn't matter what comes my way, because I'll completely dominate it. I will become a Dragon King.

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Status
Completed
Year
2021
Author
Chadadin

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ACTIONFANTASYMAGICFEMALE LEADCOMEDYSLICE OF LIFEMULTIPLE LOVERSSCHOOL LIFESTRONG LEADMALE LEADSECRET IDENTITYMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSNON-HUMAN LEADSHORT STORYURBAN FANTASYPROGRESSIONATTRACTIVE LEAD

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Rating
3.7/ 5.0
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17
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9,168

Chapters(15 total)

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Community Reviews(5)

  • CloverXIVRoyal Road
    ā˜…ā˜…ā˜…ā˜…ā˜… 5.0
    I think the story is really starting to get interesting, I can't wait for Niko to see more of the underworld. Chapter 12 really ended on a cliff hanger Lots of little setups that could foreshadow a bunch of cool things. I want to see more of the dragons being explored. Since changing niko has gained a bit of an ego, maybe running into another dragon helps him regain that composure . Keep it going my GšŸ’ŖšŸ½
  • Dhruv@010200Royal Road
    ā˜…ā˜…ā˜…ā˜…ā˜… 5.0
    Pretty good work. Character development could be better. Feels like we know almost nothing about the MC. Other than that it's fine. Grammer and style is great. It did feel as if story is ignoring certain aspects like freaking out after you discover you're a dragon, your friends are a half orc and a succubus. But that's the only thing it's missing. Keep up the good work. You'll improve.
  • BullerRoyal Road
    ā˜…ā˜…ā˜…ā˜…ā˜… 4.5
    When looking at the start of the story, Wattpad came to mind within a instant. The lkinda trope start reminded me of some of those older fictions you would see on a special kind of genre on that site. But, then I thought it would fit better for SH, it's characters reminding me of a very LN-inspired novel. That changed a few chapters later and now I'm now exactly sure what to think.
    Style? It's decent enough. A bit different from what I usually read. Grammar? Not terrible but can use some work in the more advanced areas. Good enough to read. 4.5/5
  • ZaazeshRoyal Road
    ā˜…ā˜…ā˜… 3.0
    Meh, it's all right.
    The story has potential but hasn't done much with it yet, I hope it continues.
    The characters feel slightly hollow and underdeveloped, specially the protagonist. At first he has one personality, and as he goes through the plot it seems to change drastically without so much of a second though. It could be explained as the transformation affecting his mind as well as his body, but that is barley mentioned as an afterthought when it should be a major plot point.
    We don't really see or even know anything about the protagonist besides the main plot, which makes it difficult to connect with him.
    Some secondary characters don't really make much sense like being cold and even aggressive with one another to cuddling in a sofa in the next scene.
    There's some minor grammatical mistakes, some mistaken words ("who" -> "how", "know" -> "no", etc) and even some shift from 3rd to 2nd perspective somewhere. Nothing that makes it hard to read or anything, but it could do with some proofreading.
    Overall, I would say it reads like a fairly typical male power fantasy, but nothing terrible, pretty entertaining.Ā  I've read much worse and I hope the autor continues to experiment with this.
  • ThragnarRoyal Road
    ā˜…ā˜…ā˜… 2.5
    The main character just doesn't fit with the direction of the story. He feels overly naive and gullible, and just doesn't match up with someone that any of these people in the story would be interested in much less the reader.
    Story wise, the world building needs a lot of fleshing out and a better understanding of the time passed in story.