{Remastered}

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Status

Hiatus

Author

boi the king

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• HarpoRoyal Road

  ★ 1.0

  I Can Create World {Remastered} has an interesting concept, but the lack of character building and horrible grammar stops the story from being anything more than fluff.
  Style:
  Again, the concept of someone inheriting the power to create a world has an incredible amount of potential. It's clear that the author does have a plan for the overarching story. Unfortunately, due to the poor pacing of the work, and issues I'll get to in a moment, it falls short of it's potential. There is no nuance to the MC's power. There are inconsistencies in the way it's even described, going from omnipotence to not, going from his strength to borrowed power. At the end of some chapters there are pseudo-intellectual r/iamverysmart quotes from the MC himself which just come off as cheesy and something any high schooler could come up with - and that's not including all the times the MC spouts phrases with similar faux-deep messages, said by some "wise man" who is never named.
  Story:
  I understand that at the time of this review it's still early days for this work. Regardless of that fact, there is very little content above the MC tinkering with his powers. The most story we get is in the first chapter, but even that is scarce on details. It doesn't even feel like setup for anything, just some events that occur at different points in time in relation to a character we feel nothing for.
  Grammar:
  This is the point I really want to emphasize in regards to this story; it is just difficult to read. I don't know if the author is on the younger side, or English is not their first language, but whatever the case may be, reading this story is a terrible experience. Frequent typos, punctuation mistakes, sentences that just make no sense, etc. in literally every chapter so far. This could be the best story in the world but the way that it's written comes off so incredibly sloppy and hard to get through I doubt most people could make it past the first chapter. I've taken out a small portion of the text