Pint-Sized Prompt-Fills: December 2017
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
An anthology of super short scenes involving magical aliens and suspicious dragonflies.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Fay Voss
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 5
- Views
- 21,892
Chapters(23 total)
- BonusNov 17, 2018
- SlideNov 17, 2018
- HogNov 16, 2018
- EvilNov 16, 2018
- NoeLNov 16, 2018
- RevealNov 16, 2018
- FunNov 16, 2018
- SoapNov 16, 2018
- MythNov 16, 2018
- TalkNov 16, 2018
- SugarrushNov 16, 2018
- OneNov 16, 2018
- PenguinNov 15, 2018
- SneezeNov 15, 2018
- StickyNov 15, 2018
- SteamyNov 15, 2018
- BonfireNov 15, 2018
- CozyNov 15, 2018
- BellsNov 15, 2018
- SensesNov 15, 2018
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★ 2.5This is a collection of some short and other extremely short chapters that are little glimpse or scenes between a handful of characters. Kaia and Kits is the main focus, but they are never really developed and the whole alien-aspect from the blurb can just as easily be replaced with 'magical'. Some of the scenes are so short that the ads bracketing the story take up the majority of the page, and I wonder why they even needed a separate chapter. There is no major story, no clear limitations and nothing which doesn't seem like characters having a bit of a lark. It is not bad, but having a hundred or so words a scene is not enough to really grow characters. The ending does try to fix this, but this whole prompt-piece feels disconnected.