On a Blank Canvas

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Description

An accidental death?

Transmigrated to a foreign world?

I feel a strange power within me... and it's.. blank?!

Real Synopsis: A boy without dreams, without a loving family, without friends or plans in life, accidentally falling off the roof of a building after being unfairly fired from his job.

Though he awakens to find himself in a hospital bed totally uninjured and his name forgotten, in a totally different world?! A world of magic and science, together with a strange power residing within him... but upon a closer look, it was blank.

Blank? Blank like a canvas... waiting to be filled, and so he did.

Join him as he fills his canvas, living in this new world, as it won't be his last..

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First 25 chapters originally posted elsewhere , but hiatused for 5 months due to writer's block and pressured by the average release rate on the site.

I'm a majorly beginner writer and this is my first story!! Construtive critsism is welcome!!

Will post the 24 chapters soon

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: ExplosiveBubble

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 32
Views: 12,011

Chapters(15 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

bloo233Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I really enjoyed this one.
The MC is a bit on the overpowered side, but I absolutely love how he changes through the story. The story itself is interesting, it's kind of slice of life, but with more action than the usual. The world building is incredible here, and don't get me started on the magic system.
The magic system used here allows for pretty much anything you can think of. This gives the author the ability to throw in crazy abilities, which leaves me excited for the future of this story.
The grammar is readable, no obvious mistakes.
If there was any negatives, it would be that there isn't too many interesting side characters. It's pretty much a one man show so far, but I'm hoping that's bc there's only 15 chapters released. I definitely recommend this.
NetiZenRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
So I was asked my opinion on this story. Thus I decided to write a review of it. Overall 3 stars, very cliche in the "I stole it from another story" way not "I used the Archtypes because I needed a new character and couldn't think of one" way. But it is in line with a "novice writer" and hope that Bubblegum continues to create more novels/fan fix and improves. Also, Epic cover art, it's a shame that this story isn't about a sword wielding noble girl or something. Because, that art would be perfect for a sword wielding badass MC.
I'll leave the style score to later and start with grammar. This story has a major problem with run on, and on, and on sentences and needs to be reintruduced to the " . ". Aside from that and some basic gramatical mistakes, this story is at a highschool level nothing major but nothing exilerating either.
As Bubblegum herself said, they like to use cliches. The use of these cliches arent particularly imaginitive and the MC and story itself seems to be heading in a pradictible, and something I don't highly rate, self fulfillment direction. The MC has a somewhat imaginitive power but it's quickly becoming a smart phone instead of an artistic canvas or a blank slate character MC to work with.
Originaly I would have given this story a higher rating as the MC is fat and not either currently or in a hidden way handsome. but cliche he becomes androginous handsome MC. Also, while it might be stated later currently all the people in this world are not barbies and kens. I am, obvieously a fan of beutiful people. Who in the world isn't? though we may all have different styles and definitions. However, unless it's a self fulfilment harem story (smut and only smut) then not everone should be a barbie or a ken. So far this story doesn't have a specific descriptive about how everybody is beutiful except for the MC who later becomes beutiful. Instead it leaves things blank except for the few it specificaly identifies. I actualy like this way