Not your average Bird

Self-Published

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Description

Rago didn't have what you would call agoodlife... Or lives, in his case. For you see, Rago is one of an infinitesimally small number of people that remembers his previous lives.

In his first life, he was a young spartan warrior that was killed for being too weak.

In his second life, he was a young squire in the courts of Camelot that was tragically killed when his master lost control of his horse, and it kicked him in the head.

In his third life, he was a child soldier in Africa that managed to escort a group of children to safety before he was shot in the head by their now ex-captors.

And in his fourth life, he spent his entire life in a hospital bed being treated for a currently incurable auto-immune disease.

... But, that's when things changed. He was suddenly brought before an all-powerful being and given yet another go at life... Let's hope things are different this time.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: ReWight

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 840
Views: 107,367

Chapters(15 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

AccountName10Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Great so far, can't wait for more!
Novice BladesmanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story is coming along nicely. The character and world building are off to a fantastic start and the writing style has improved dramatically from the author’s first books. There are only 6 chapters at the time of this review but each one is a joy to read.
This novel is a much slower paced one, especially when compared to A Snake’s Rise, but I for one enjoy that. It allows the reader to understand what is going on in the story while allowing the story to keep flowing. This novel comes off as well planned and thought out. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
TheAlpha2000Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Darn good story so far keep em coming ken
True_MercuryRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I quite like this story, you don't often see reincarnation stories about things that aren't human/elves/etc... so a bird is a fresh take on the genre.
Currently there are 13 chapters (14 with the prologue) so there isn't too much to judge but the pacing and characters are great so far.
DraekRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Characters
All characters elaborated upon have some depth. You glossed over Rage's siblings a bit too much , I understand that introducing a throng of characters in a chapter would have been bad, but another second-hand comment on Rage's relationship with them could have helped.
Society
I really like the setting, the way real life logic gets shoved away at times is nicely handled, and the bird community is orginal and cozy
Logic gaps
There are some things that had me raising my eyebrows. Having military school not cover training after evolution is a bad idea. Having bird squads fight unarmed seems strange as well, they seem civilized enough to use them, and tactics, and traps, yet there has not been any mention of those yet.
I also found it strange how Rage could not identify a thundeer, considering it is a species that lives near his home, and he went to school
Style
Your pacing is pretty good, as you manage to keep the reader invested with what is occurring, and your writing style is good as well.
IhateeverythingRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Maybe I am a little harsh with the rating, but this story definitely isn't what you would expect after the snake saga. First off, it's very slow paced compared to the original. And as of chapter 5, it's very light, there isn't an obvious goal either, which is a definite minus, as web-novels need to be a bit faster with the pacing to keep readers engaged. To elaborate and draw parallels to the snake saga, our MC doesn't have a goal yet that he wants to fight for, while the snake saga MC had the obvious goal of the gods promising him his wife that he has yearned for, for 40 years. I imagine it's going to get better, but as of yet, it's a bit disappointing.