MagiCraft Master - [Mass Isekai], [LitRPG], [Crafting]

Information

Status

Hiatus

Author

WilburWoods

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• [Reckless]Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Wilbur clearly invested a lot of care into this story, and it shows right from the beginning. I really enjoyed it.
  It's too soon to make a full judgment, but so far, everything works well. I had a great time reading it.
  Style: This is my favorite aspect of the story. It's simple yet engaging, just the way I like it. The author successfully makes the main character relatable, even with his numerous flaws.
  Grammar: I didn't notice any issues, but then again, I wasn't looking for them. The text flows well, and I didn't find anything wrong.
  Story: I enjoyed the initial setting before the Isekai elements came in. The dialogues are good, and I can see where the story is going. If the AI starts interacting with Logan, I anticipate some interesting dynamics. I was particularly intrigued by the countdown plot point and how it was resolved. It leaves me curious about what's to come and how exactly is this new world.
  Characters: I have to admit, I didn't find myself particularly attached to them, except maybe for Frey. But that's not necessarily a downside. Logan is not your typical nice guy, yet Wilbur manages to make you want to follow his journey in the new world. So for me, that's a plus.
• Magic_InitiateRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This story is awesome. I love the character interactions and development. Also a romance that doesn't just tip toe around eachother, nice.
  Good pacing that keeps me from getting bored. Interesting magic system that I want to see more of. Grammar is good, doesn't have weird phrases.
  Wilbur is just a good writer, plain and simple.
• PapaVirginRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  this is amazing, this is the reason i wake up first thing in the morning with a smile.
  prepare myself a healthy breakfast and start my day at the job i enjoy thinking about what's coming next in this master piece of a series.
  Really hope to see more of this very soon.
• PeteygRRRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This is a great story, and serves well as a Coming of Age progression story. The MC starts off as brash, arrogant and self-absorbed, but by the end is beginning to transition to a strong, confident leader. I would have liked it of there had been a better final conflict between the MC and his father, but it is setup for the second book, I think.
  Overall, this is a very fun read. It treads down the path of very well known tropes, but it does it well, and the story is fun.
• Loki's ChildRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Main Character actually has a spine and does not just let himself be walked all over. He does seem to have Daddy issues but if that man was my father "He would have died peacefully in his sleep." Interesting plot developments and Class systems. For me to get my 50 words let me just say this Give it a chance.
• SpacemosesRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  After an indefinite hiatus, the chapters have been deleted.
  Anybody know what's going on? I'm a bit bummed, I was enjoying this series.
  Logan's transition from spoiled rich kid to begruging leader in spite of his father, in the first book, was gradual enough that it was believable without taking from the rest of the story.
  UPDATE: I see that book 1 and 2 have been published. That probably explains where it went... Good for the author, congratulations. As an ungrateful free reader, an update here would have been appreciated.
• picuRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  I like a more decisive mc , probably the story is going there it does say slow burn but that time imo would have been better spent with mc soloing longer and then meeting up with the group  anyway it’s difficult for me to get past the father son dynamic  since he can’t even stand up to him
• OnyavarRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  This story has not a good intro text on what to expect, so here it goes:
  The Arrogant Old Master has a son. The latter is a spoiled wannabe artist with good intentions and a rebellious attitude always held back by Dad, so that the reader is supposed to love him. Our Heroic Young Master also has the most beautiful love interest ever, and Evil Daddy (who coincidentally is the richest man in the world) installs an experimental neural AI in his son's head right before the System Apocalypse arrives and swallows Earth.
  Guess who is now the most important human on Earth, able to rescue humanity and curbstomb dear old Daddy?
  (Please note, I really like to use the whole gamut of stars, and rate all stories on the same absolute scale: Readable, just decent stories get 2 stars, and then I go over good and very good ones towards excellent stories.) I know that I'm early here, but so far I see a halfway solid story but nothing extraordinary. So... yeah: Good.
  The story is LitRPG, numbers go BRrrr, and there are lots of infoboxes, stats and quite some action, including some humor. Author assures the reader that no Xianxia or Harem is going to happen, which sounds like a quite good deal. If this sounds like your cup of tea, you're still going to love it.
  Grammar is fine, the narrative style isn't too bad. The characters fall (in my opinion) rather flat and I just can't sympathize with th MC, sorry. The story itself is not that original: System apocalypses have been done to undeath and back, and the combination with "Sympathetic Young Master" stories as well as "MC has AI" is not that glorious either. But the author doesn't seem to lack all creativity.
• SenjoRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  I love crafting stories and I really wanted to like this one, but it really got ruined by unrealistic and annoying characters. The MC is a rich kid snob who tries to pretend he's not. That gets annoying real fast even with a fun crafting sequences. The bodyguads which are supposed yo be top of the line cia/ex-military people can't even think for themselves or know any survival in the wild techniques. Last, but certainlu not least is the MCs father which was the richest guy on earth, he's so incompetent as a leader and an asshole, always berating his son and the son eating it all up. To finish up with the characters the women seem to only serve as sexual objects and aren't really developed at all.
  Grammar is good.
  Magic system is weak, but kind of fun anyway. The MC basically says what he wants and it happens or not, bacause of level requirements. Despite magic being really random it's fun seeing mc create magic items.
  TLDR: Good premise ruined by really weak character writing.
• SambarRoyal Road

  ★ 0.5

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