I CAN GIVE TALENTS

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Description

A cultivator with normal aptitude finally found a treasure that could change his life but to his disappointment, he could not directly benefit from it.

Author's Note: The MC is not smart and serious. He is goofy most of the time. This is a harem story. Leyvi will have many women. Thank you for reading and supporting me.

Warning: My grammar is shit. Proceed with caution.

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Upload Schedule: At least four chapters per week.

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Information

Status: Ongoing
Year: 2024
Author: PotatoHero

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 420
Views: 687,120

Chapters(482 total)

What readers say about I CAN GIVE TALENTS

“The story is fun. The MC is quite likable and he definitely isn’t weak. To keep from spoiling let’s just say he’s ridiculously lucky, but rarely benefits from it. Instead, it’s those around him that do. He’s actually strong from hard work and a good mentali…”
DrSkillzRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“This is a hidden gem. The writing quality at the start is quite medicore but functional. But it quickly picks up in quality. The Story is quite comfy despite being a harem, which I normally dislike. The main character is not the smartest man alive but also…”
AsurRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(8)

DrSkillzRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story is fun. The MC is quite likable and he definitely isn’t weak. To keep from spoiling let’s just say he’s ridiculously lucky, but rarely benefits from it. Instead, it’s those around him that do. He’s actually strong from hard work and a good mentality.
This next bit is mostly for the author… so I guess it counts as spoilers.
The Toy Spirit explained to the MC that he can enter and exit the inner space with the voice commands “log in” and “log out”. Upon entering and exiting this space the MC quickly realized that time stops outside (irl) when he’s inside the space. He even hints at exploring this feature further later… BUT THEN NEVER DOES. This could have, and still could be, one of the most BROKEN aspects of his system. He could have a Hyperbolic Time Chamber! A freaking training room that allows him to compress months if not years of training into less than a single second!!!
AND HE NEVER USES IT!!!!!
At least explain why he can’t just login, train, and logout! Give me closure for god’s sake!
…Apart from that…
Definitely give it a read! Really recommend!
AsurRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is a hidden gem. The writing quality at the start is quite medicore but functional. But it quickly picks up in quality.
The Story is quite comfy despite being a harem, which I normally dislike.
The main character is not the smartest man alive but also not dumb giving other characters the ability to shine.
MrBobermanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Love the story so far keep it up. The MC looks so much older in the cover then in my head. Probably because I'm use to the effeminate MC's in other cultivation books. MC is dumb\not and its refreshing. Pandampress better be the first to have his children. Much love.
Clawdius_TaloniousRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I had a good time with this one, it may be tropey or follow genre conventions or what have you, but it's enjoyable IMO.
Sometimes it feels like things get lost in translation, but because of the nature of the tale it's fine.
The protagonist could be said to be a bit of a Mary Sue I guess? That's not a deal breaker for me, not everyone needs to be taken off guard and unprepared and overcome adversity on their walk to the mail box. I can imagine others having some complaints along those lines. I can see how it misses opportunities for drama I suppose, but there's still plenty of that to go around.
I've dinged it half a star even though it accomplishes everything it means to, because the premise of the tale gets lost in the shuffle as there's not much for it to say for long periods. It feels like there's room to focus on each talent's recipient and their improvements a little more.
For a story that's using tropes to accomplish a lot with a small foundation, they get the interpersonal relationships right and that's the main thing in these.
ZuaxeoqRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Sorry for my English it's my third language.
I started reading this to just pass time but got hooked by the story and it's entirety it's quite a fun read for me specifically the comedy and the characters interaction with each other. Really like the concept of the story where mc must train harder to keep up with the other characters because of some spoilers and thinking outside the box to master or better his skills and using those said skills to perform better on other fields not only in the martial way but on other significant actions or fields
Mavros9257Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The story has a good start, it hooked me from the start and made me anticipate the next chapter. Especially since it has great uploading time, but the past tens of chapter are really boring. It's just telling leyvi's harem journey which is taking too long. The last chapter about the mc was on 1st week of june, and now we're in 2nd week of july and yet the story barely progressed and he's just milking the story for more chapter. I get that he wants us to know more about important side characters, but taking up at least 7-8 chapters is too much. Although i still recommend reading the story since it's still quite good, but should probably stock up on chapters once you reach the latest one.
DeikonRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I want to say this story is fun!
I don't know about harems too much...
But I do know that the way the MC handles the people in his life and the gift he receives. I really like it a lot.
I'm enjoying the characters around the MC and what he does with what he's able to give. This is a great story and lighthearted too.
bullseye2230Royal Road
★★★ 3.0
I started off as a big fan of this one, the story concept was interesting and not a common trope in Xanxia, an MC who ISNT the strongest one around, but who has a cheat to boost those around him. And it starts off pretty great. Reasonable struggles, exploring the system, fighting through the typical weak struggles with the help of his closest ally, and trying creative solutions to overcome the limitations of the system he has and his lack of strong bonds at the start.
Then, by about chapter 50 the whole talent system starts to really fade into the backdrop. Its basically ignored and the MC changes from being the one being supported to being the typical "hidden powerhouse who fights above his level" Xanxia protag. I kept sticking with it, hoping that would change and the spark of what made the story good would come back, but I can safely say it doesn't.
MC gives out a talent in Chapter 61, and then seems to mostly forget the system even exists, or at least the Author does. the next time the Talent System is used? Chapter 223. and how does he use it? MC doesn't even bother to think and just randomly throws a bunch of talents on the harem ladies he has picked up in the meantime.
There are some great moments in the story, and the writing quality definitely goes up as the author finds his legs. The grammar issues are minor, and the characters are pretty unique and compelling (at least at the start, ~Chapter 200 a lot of the harem seems to be losing their individuality and agency, and getting a new member has in most cases gone from a process of attachment and emotional development to "Anda has an evil plan" and within ~5 chapters they are a de facto part of the harem, just waiting to actually seal the deal.
I want to like this story, I loved the start, and the Alchemy Competition arc was very fun to read and a peak of the storytelling itself! But the simple fact that the author seems to want to just write off the actual story hook is just slowly bleeding the story down i