Glory to the Goblin Lord (STUB)
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Prince Cedric of the Blackrose is betrayed by his allies and slain in what ought to have been a standard goblin extermination mission.
To his horror, he is reborn as a lowly goblin hatchling with all memories of his previous life intact.
Thoughts of vengeance keep him going as he seeks to unravels the many mysteries of the goblin world and their evolution chain.
He vows to make it to the top, rising to the fabled status of Goblin Lord.
Destiny awaits.
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Glory to the Goblin Lord is available ine-bookandaudiobookformat, narrated by Jack Voraces and published by Voraces Tavern.
Amazon US:https://www.royalroad.com/amazon/B0FDB4LZ24(edit: Can't get this one URL to link properly for some reason...)Amazon UK:https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B0FDB4LZ24Audible US:https://www.audible.com/pd/B0FH7MZQL9Audible UK:https://www.audible.co.uk/pd/B0FH7N5DG4
This is a first, self-contained narrative (~93.4k words)set in a burgeoning extended universe.
Plot-heavy, Isekai, High fantasy, Grimdark, Anti-hero lead, LitRPGlite(this means LitRPG elements are present but not omnipresent)
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- Status
- Ongoing
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- One Way Justice
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- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
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- 857
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Chapters(2 total)
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Community Reviews(10)
- EmolRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This is a really well penned narrative, in which the author presents a clear storyline, intertwined with a deep commitment to the setting and the characters with prose to match.
Style
In my opinion, prose should always try to complement its setting, particularly in fiction. This is a principle the author adheres to this with skill in this medieval fantasy. The prose not only enriches the setting but also enhances the authenticity of the world they've crafted. This is maintained with consistency throughout. The very best fictions out there do this, which is why they are the best. This author has kept to this well.
Story
The story has a very clear narrative and direction, I particularly liked how the LitRPG elements are not slammed in your face from the get go. In my opinion, too many fictions do this which numbs the charm of the genre. The author instead approaches this with a more unreliable narrator which allows us to more gradually understand the mechanics of the world.
The chapters are each thoughtfully built up and progress the plot well. My one bit of feedback is that I find myself looking for more depth in certain areas, such as the intricacies of goblin society. One of the premises of the fiction is interesting, and I am sure more mechanics will be explained in future chapters, but I do find myself curious as to how such a society could realistically function, as the premise seems to give an inherent advantage to goblins that other races don't have, as far as I know at this stage! It will be interesting to see how the power balance is maintained or not, as might be the case.
I am a fan of these types of stories, and the narrative is engaging, so I am looking forward to see where it goes!
Grammar
I have seen no issues here. It is really well written, as I have said before and the attention to detail on grammar is well done.
Character
The aspect where this fiction truly excels is in its character development. The author has crafted authentic characters, ensurin - TheJournalistRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0The story grips you with its intense atmosphere from the first chapter both the due to the beauty and intricacy of the plot, but also because of the the author's obvious talent. Overall, I highly recommend it as it is really a good story and I can't wait to see where it's going.
Good work! - TomThomTomRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0In the realm of the Isekai genre, it's rare to come across a work that not only captivates the imagination but also profoundly stirs the mind. GttGL achieves this with finesse, weaving a tale that is as intellectually engaging as it is emotionally compelling.
From the onset, OneWayJustice establishes a world rich in detail and complexity. The narrative style is dramatic and intense, it blends traditional fantasy high prose with a fresh, modern sensibility. The story reads fluid and evocative, painting vivid scenes that transport the reader to the heart of the Lothrian kingdom and its surrounding environs. Each chapter unfolds with a rhythm that is both deliberate and natural, I quickly became on the edge of their seat, eagerly anticipating what comes next.
The story itself is a tapestry of intrigue, betrayal, and transformation. The journey of Prince Cedric, from a noble heir to a goblin hatchling, is not just a physical transformation but a profound exploration of identity and purpose. The narrative deftly navigates themes of loyalty, vengeance, and the enduring nature of the human spirit (goblin spirit?). OneWayJustice's ability to maintain a delicate balance between the development of the character and the progression of the plot shows great talent.
What truly sets GttGL apart is its layered storytelling. The vivid descriptions of battles, the intricate details of goblin society, and the nuanced portrayal of Cedric's internal struggle are masterfully executed. The first arc (rookie games) so far is a brilliant example of how to blend action with character development. It's a testament to the author's skill in creating a narrative that is both thrilling and thought-provoking.
This story is absolutely worth following and I am looking forward to discovering Cedric's arc, which judging from the story so far will be full of surprises. - Hannibal ForgeRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Overall—5/5 Stars
Let me start by saying that Glory to the Goblin Lord is less of a novel in the traditional sense, and more of an exercise in mastery of prose. One Way Justice—whom for the sake of brevity I will simply refer to as OWJ henceforth—is a master of the flowery flow. His penchant for lyrical, rhythmic, and almost musical storytelling flows well into the perception of Shakespearian tragedy which fully permeates Glory to the Goblin Lord from prow to stern. Why the ship metaphor? Because it is a ship, dear reader; a travelling craft bearing us forth 'pon a tide of soliloquy and epic prose.
What Glory to the Goblin Lord does best is not simply the writing, the vernacular, nor the artistic painting of melodramatic—in the best way!—imagery, but instead the vigorous enchantment of the human scope of imagination. The story pulls you in, not because of the excellent world-building, the compelling and just-dark-enough main character Cedric, or due to the phenomenal scene-setting. No, it draws you in because you simply have to know. It's an unempirical and fantastical enchantment that forces you to ask the question: What happens next?!
That, in my eyes, is success made manifest. So, with that stated, onward to the breakdown!
Style—4.5/5 Stars
Perhaps this score shocks you. I can understand it might, but allow me to elucidate upon why I delivered it: OWJ is indeed a master of prose, and that title is well-deserved, but there is an implicit and critical point of minor issue with this writing style. It is not immense enough to warrant the loss of a full star, and certainly the narrative depth and smooth flow of the writing more than account for it holistically, but this is an Advanced Review—and honesty is ever the best policy.
The simple fact is, OWJ's prose can drag. That is not always for the worse, and I know more than a few readers that obsess over the notion of drawn out prose; but there is an adage that I adhere to which I believe Glory to the Goblin Lord could - JR CastleRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0It's hard to know where to start, because in some ways you've probably seen a story like this before, but at the same time the way it subverts some of the rules you might expect from a reincarnation plot are actually pretty clever and I would say unique. The trouble is it's hard to explain why without just outright spoiling one of the big twists. I guess I'll just go ahead and say that if you're coming into this wanting something familiar and comforting you'll find it, and if you're hoping for a bit of spice in that classic formula you'll find that too.
***
Style
Writing-wise I would call the style rather poetic, aping a sort of quasi-Shakespearean voice that gets you into the medieval fantasy setting without ever crossing into being difficult to read. Characters speak with a very dramatic syntax and cadence that feels very natural and even hits on the genuinely epic at certain points. I do think there are some moments where this language might get a bit unruly in terms of grammar, leading to bits of clumsy wording. Still, there's an ambition to the writing that I appreciate greatly, particularly when compared to other webnovels.
Story
Most impressive to me is the lore and worldbuilding that gets slowly drip fed as the plot moves along. We start with a reincarnation, but the mystery of its source is one the story takes seriously and eventually gets revealed in a way that pleasantly broadens the scope of the world. Thankfully the plot is very clear amidst all this—the characters are seeking revenge, and everything they do is to head in that direction. Interestingly there's plenty of moral discomfort that comes with the whole setup, particularly as the protagonist comes to accept his new position among people whom he once thought of as mere monsters.
Characters
The characters are active, reflective of their actions, and don't necessarily get along. Their divergent motives and steadily presented internal worlds drive much of the emotion, the extent of which surprised m - homertigerRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Well written and interesting plot. Even though it is new with not many chapters, I look forward to see where the story will go and will keep following... bit low on litrpg elements so far but the prose is very nice to read, and hopefully the stat and system will be explained more. Hope the prince finds the revenge he wants.
- Dreamer's RiotRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5(This review is part of a review swap)
This story is an enjoyable read, and well worth your time. Considering the frequency of updates, the quality is higher than I would expect.
The Style:
The style is where this story really shines. It can, very occasionally, push just a little too far with the rapid fire metaphor but honestly this kind of gives the story a little extra charm. It is almost fairytale-esque with it's descriptive language which is the highest form of complement from me. Overall the style keeps your attention the entire time you read and paints a detailed picture of the world.
The Story:
The story is interesting, it does a good job particularly in exploring the effects of the sudden change in fortune on the main character. It does a good job adding depth to this type of story and not just telling it as a power fantasy.
The Grammar:
This isn't too bad, although it is the weakest part of the stories. The only truly distracting thing is the choice to use single quotes for all dialog, rather than double quotes, although I notice this is being revised in some chapters, so it shouldn't be an issue by the time anyone reading this get's to it.
Character:
The characters, mainly the hero of the story, are quite good. Dynamic, with depth and a genuine examination of the emotional impacts of their situation. All in all a well constructed character, even if the character from my story would probably try to kill them given the opportunity.
Overall a worthwhile read, and one that won't leave you waiting to continue the story. - G.A. RashRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5A brilliant read.
I enjoyed the main character and found myself rooting for him in every chapter.
It Story reminded me very much of "So I'm a Spider, So What?" A solid start with good world-building. The descriptions are solid and well done. I Always enjoy this type of Story so I will be reading along as new chapters are published. - The ChaliceRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Glory to the Goblin Lord is harrowing tale of a prince who is betrayed by someone close to him, only to be reborn as the vile creature he hates most—goblins. Cursed by the duality of a man with royal blood and being reborn a wretch, Cedric must struggle to be the best goblin he can be, one way or another. He’s taunted by the honor known to him in his past life and refuses to let the spirit of a prince die. This was an exciting page-turner and my biggest complaint is that I have to wait for it to be published.
Story: The story comes on strong as we watch Cedric’s gripping final moments. Everything he knew and held dear was ripped away before his eyes and he’s quickly reborn as a goblin. His past convictions are a large driving force behind the plot but we also get the thrill of his adventure starting off weak with hopes of being the greatest, with a few really interesting goblin-esque tweaks. The story is still a young, but it has me interested for more so far.
Style: The tone is serious and can be a little gruesome at times, but that’s just the nature of goblin life. We’re getting a lot of litRPG and progression elements in the works, but the intention seems to be to subtly place them as we make our way through the introductory arc. I’m sure it’ll go into depth once we’re a bit more ingratiated, but I felt the game elements to be a nice easy touch without feeling out of place. The details were thorough and really brought the world to life, along with many facts of goblin life. If anything, some of the introspective moments seemed a little verbose, but they were all well-written and added to the character’s depth.
Grammar: Minor bits of awkward phrasing here and there, but I didn’t really notice any grammatical errors and maybe one typo. I’d say there’s no real issues with the grammar.
Character: It wasn’t hard to connect with Cedric. We’re given a very rich background on him from the beginning, his ambitions and what’s important to him laid bare. Of course, he loses - RscottysBRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Maybe what troubled me is that the goblins are pretty much human in nature, and that quite a few hatchlings are intelligent and skilled as if they were all a bunch of reincarnators same as the MC.
Otherwise the writing is good, pace is good, plot is also good, at least as far as I got into it.