Forsaken By The World

Self-Published

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Description

How much are you willing to do for your dream?

Kuroki Rin thought she had done everything she could to become the Hero she had always wanted to be. She thought that even if she wasn't blessed with Superpowers like her family, she could reach their height with enough hard work. Yet, when reality came calling—when monster who could move at the speed of sound nearly killed her— she was made aware of how shallow her thinking was.

Driven by Despair, how was she supposed to resist the temptations of a Villain?

Schedule: Monday

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Sky573

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.8/ 5.0
Followers: 37
Views: 8,327

Chapters(16 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

BedwigRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The grammar is good for the most part, with minor spelling and punctuation mistakes. On this front, this story's grammar is average to above average on this platform.
The story so far is pretty interesting, and an interesting world. Still waiting for some more worldbuilding to describe the rest of the world, since so far, the world building is mostly limited to the MC's POV. There have been some mentions of a few places, though. This story does have some abuse, which might upset some people. It's not too bad, though, and is only explicidly written once or twice, the rest are just vauge passing mentions or implied.
The characters are interesting so far, though still flat. There is only 13 chapters, so there wasn't much room for any major character development. The backstories are pretty interesting too.
The style is good. The fight scenes are detailed. I'm not the kind of person to really concentrate during the fight scenes, so I might've missed some mistakes. I also won't be able to tell if it's a 'good' fight scene, or a 'bad' fight scene, mostly because I don't know the difference.
Overall, it's interesting, and I have hopes for this to develope into a good story.