Fallen

Self-Published

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Description

He hadn't offended anyone, but they offended him.

He hadn't cursed anyone, they cursed him.

He hadn't killed anyone, they killed everyone related to him.

Thus, he silently vowed.

"They plan to offend me for their own interest? I shall give them plenty of reason to do so. Do they want to curse me? Please do so, since I'm more than willing to be your living bane. Kill me? Sadly, you won't be the last having this type of wishful thinking."- The Devil

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I think that I can manage 1 chapter per week now, maybe 2 but certainly not three.

PS: As I think that there should be small mistakes here left and right, I'd gladly welcome a proofreader.

Chapters(59 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

  • GiantSlugRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I loved the fiction name.
    It had that special quality.
    5/5 for the name of the fiction.
    The story is nice at the chapter where i am (1) but i see the promise of a great story.Good choice with the chapter name.
  • WaysmRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I simply love it.
    The grammar is very decent, the style is good, the story makes sense and easy to get into, the character need to have a better depth but it'll surely come with time and as for the style, it is my type.
    There is everything I love in a novel.
    I hope that it won't be dropped >//>
  • hamza446Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Tell me when the next chapter will be released its a good original story
  • Apathetic125Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    So far so good your seems to be going in the right direction and I couldn't spot any grammatical mistakes so my review is good. Although my review may or may not change as the story continues
  • ArchdevilMRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    This Novel/Story of yours is one of what i've been lookin for
    Keep up the good work and please don't drop this one cause i really like it.
    PS:And i loved the characters that you used here.
  • RznRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    This short story really does feel like it does not have enough backstory, or is incomplete in a way, because it starts a little too late and ends at what might be the most interesting of set ups. Not much to say without spoiling the content of the story, sadly. This good enough that I wanted to read more.