Dumb Luck

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2022

Author

Borealis

• 1.7- All the Elements of a Bad Day
  Dec 13, 2022
• 1.6- The Truth, the Whole Truth, and Nothing but the Truth
  Dec 12, 2022
• 1.5- Housekeeping
  Dec 12, 2022
• 1.4- Government Funded Facility
  Dec 11, 2022
• 1.3- A Change in Management
  Dec 9, 2022
• 1.2- The Blind Man and the Dog
  Dec 9, 2022
• 1.1- Getting Called on by the Teacher
  Dec 8, 2022
• Interlude 1- A Miserly Man
  Dec 9, 2022
• 0.4- Emotionally Enforced Warming
  Dec 7, 2022
• 0.3- Deserving of an Explanation
  Dec 7, 2022
• 0.2- Life, Given Form
  Dec 7, 2022
• 0.1- Alone with Yourself
  Dec 7, 2022

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• Out of HereRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  It's a pretty generic LITRPG with a couple odd quirks here and there. Some are good, and others not so much.
  Style- Stlye is fine. Not bad, but nothing that stands out all that much. Maybe a bit lacking in emotional force and immersion
  Grammar- I can't find any grammatical errors, but I'm reading late and could be mistaken. Sentances seem properly structures, but for some reason I feel like there are too many commas? Diction could be more diverse, but that's just a personal preference. Objectively, it's alright.
  Story- As I said, story is generic? Not much to say about that
  Character- Only real issue would have to be the characters. They feel kind of flat and maybe a bit similar to one another. Again, it could be because its late and I'm tired, but they all seem to blend together for me. Some of the dialogue and humor just isn't for me. I guess it feels a bit immature at times, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing. At least not considering the MC's circumstances. Just something I think.
  Give the story a try if you want, but don't get too invested since the author does not seem to be very consistent with their updates.