Dumb Luck
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Cael is one of the last souls from a dead universe to be reincarnated. In this new world, he will find that his enemies are more familiar than he could have ever expected in an unrecognizable world. After a small mistake, he's stuck dealing with the unlucky consequences of his ill-informed actions.
Hopefully he can live with that mistake and grow strong enough to one day fix it.
Please leave constructive criticism if you have any!
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Borealis
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 69
- Views
- 42,530
Chapters(52 total)
- 2.4- School SearchingJan 18, 2023
- 2.3- Faculty MeetingJan 17, 2023
- 2.2- Flagging EnergyJan 12, 2023
- 2.1- Codisco: Remember and LearnJan 11, 2023
- 1.20- Worlds ApartJan 5, 2023
- 1.19- Secure in OneselfJan 4, 2023
- 1.18- Reflections in the DarkDec 29, 2022
- 1.17- Settling in to LeaveDec 27, 2022
- 1.16- I Can't Quite SayDec 24, 2022
- 1.15- OuroborosDec 23, 2022
- 1.14- Headache InducingDec 22, 2022
- 1.13- Criminals EverywhereDec 21, 2022
- 1.12- A Bad OmenDec 20, 2022
- 1.11- Breakfast ConversationDec 18, 2022
- 1.10- Temporarily IncapableDec 18, 2022
- Interlude 2C- The Shining StarDec 17, 2022
- Interlude 2B- Mighty as the OceanDec 17, 2022
- Interlude 2A- A Stone ButterflyDec 17, 2022
- 1.9- Unarmed in the Face of DangerDec 15, 2022
- 1.8- The True Darkness in the CityDec 14, 2022
Reviews
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Community Reviews(1)
- Out of HereRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0It's a pretty generic LITRPG with a couple odd quirks here and there. Some are good, and others not so much.
Style- Stlye is fine. Not bad, but nothing that stands out all that much. Maybe a bit lacking in emotional force and immersion
Grammar- I can't find any grammatical errors, but I'm reading late and could be mistaken. Sentances seem properly structures, but for some reason I feel like there are too many commas? Diction could be more diverse, but that's just a personal preference. Objectively, it's alright.
Story- As I said, story is generic? Not much to say about that
Character- Only real issue would have to be the characters. They feel kind of flat and maybe a bit similar to one another. Again, it could be because its late and I'm tired, but they all seem to blend together for me. Some of the dialogue and humor just isn't for me. I guess it feels a bit immature at times, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing. At least not considering the MC's circumstances. Just something I think.
Give the story a try if you want, but don't get too invested since the author does not seem to be very consistent with their updates.