Dumb Luck

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

Cael is one of the last souls from a dead universe to be reincarnated. In this new world, he will find that his enemies are more familiar than he could have ever expected in an unrecognizable world. After a small mistake, he's stuck dealing with the unlucky consequences of his ill-informed actions.

Hopefully he can live with that mistake and grow strong enough to one day fix it.

Please leave constructive criticism if you have any!

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Borealis

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 69
Views: 42,530

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Community Reviews(1)

Out of HereRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
It's a pretty generic LITRPG with a couple odd quirks here and there. Some are good, and others not so much.
Style- Stlye is fine. Not bad, but nothing that stands out all that much. Maybe a bit lacking in emotional force and immersion
Grammar- I can't find any grammatical errors, but I'm reading late and could be mistaken. Sentances seem properly structures, but for some reason I feel like there are too many commas? Diction could be more diverse, but that's just a personal preference. Objectively, it's alright.
Story- As I said, story is generic? Not much to say about that
Character- Only real issue would have to be the characters. They feel kind of flat and maybe a bit similar to one another. Again, it could be because its late and I'm tired, but they all seem to blend together for me. Some of the dialogue and humor just isn't for me. I guess it feels a bit immature at times, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing. At least not considering the MC's circumstances. Just something I think.
Give the story a try if you want, but don't get too invested since the author does not seem to be very consistent with their updates.