Dream World

Self-Published

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Description

He opened his eyes; found himself in another place totally different from where he stood before. The serene moonlit landscape was replaced with a bustling street filled with people conversing and strange creatures pulling carriages. The modern sidewalk he knew was gone; even the buildings were very strange to him. "Where I'm? And whose those people are?" He asked, wiping his eyes. "What the language their speaking is?" Another question as he clapped his ears. "And what the fuck, with the atmosphere here?" Once again, another question got out of his mouth.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2023
Author
Abd.

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREFEMALE LEADTRAGEDYDRAMAMARTIAL ARTSSTRONG LEADMALE LEADSECRET IDENTITYPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAIKINGDOM BUILDINGWAR AND MILITARYGRIMDARKHIGH FANTASYCONTEMPORARYTIME TRAVEL

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
4
Views
2,926

Chapters(9 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • wingmanRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    We can see that he is a new writer that have starting to get the hang of writing so I'm not going to be too harsh on him/her.
    style: the same as many other story nothing special but would suggest an edit making the front larger for a much more present reading experience. But it all word n paper/digital anyway and most will face the same problem.
    grammer: not my best judge but god damm the story sound formal like it missing something can't say what because I don't know.
    story: look to be promising with some world building and the opening start with a gala which I think leave more questions then answer. And that a good thing it draw reader in.
    character: we don't know what the main character is but build up the side character then build the main character it give depth to the story and it allowed us to not focus on right now 2d characters.
    conclusion: the story is a dark fantasy which elements I have seen appear before but the world and the characters look to be 2d as of chapter 4 not the author fault it just that from what I have read, the world building have to drag the reader in and I haven't seen it does that yet from the last of it. But overall good job author you can do this.