Creation Online

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Helen has a secret. One that only she and her family know of. A secret that haunts her nights and disturbs her dreams. Used and defiled in circumstances that bring her more terror than shame Helen now sees the world as a terrifying place.

Locked away in her home and scared to set foot outside due to her paranoia Helen finds herself introduced to the first-ever VRMMORPG Creator Online.

As a tool to try to get over her fear of humans, Helen agrees to play. But things are not as simple as it seems and Creator Online is not what is expected.

When realities clash and worlds meet maybe a little paranoia can save the day.

Chapters on Patreon  scheduled. 60 chapters or more ahead of Royal Road

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2024
Author
EliasDTA

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREFEMALE LEADSTRONG LEADKINGDOM BUILDING

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.1/ 5.0
Followers
525
Views
290,693

Chapters(119 total)

What readers say about Creation Online

  • “Story is good and well thought out, narration is also very good(still it can be improved more), Character development is also going very smoothly,  mc don't have victim mentality and is a fighter, system is also very well tuned and thought out hopefully the…”
    RoasterRoyal Road5.0 / 5
  • “Style: Loving the way this author creates vivid images and helps you really get the emotions of her characters. Totally learning from them for some upcoming DND. Story: For a VR story this is so radically different I totally forget until something reminds.…”
    SomeBSDeityRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(4)

  • RoasterRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Story is good and well thought out, narration is also very good(still it can be improved more), Character development is also going very smoothly,  mc don't have victim mentality and is a fighter, system is also very well tuned and thought out hopefully there won't be any romance arc or something like that i wont mid if it happens after chapter 1000😃
    If auther can keep up with imagination don't rush the story it will be a great hit.
  • SomeBSDeityRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Style:
    Loving the way this author creates vivid images and helps you really get the emotions of her characters. Totally learning from them for some upcoming DND.
    Story:
    For a VR story this is so radically different I totally forget until something reminds. At first I thought it would be a neat bit of exposition but we are like 50+ chapters in and the only player in her world is her still. I've loved the detail and magic of this universe. The way they go about world building is fascinating and has made me hungry for more every time.
    I kinda wish a bit more about the mortal races was done but I get the feeling they are going to be explored more as players dive into the world and the audience gets to discover them along with the players which will be a lot of fun.
    Characters:
    I love the characters in this story. At first I thought the main was going to be some edgy whining woe is me type but we see so much development in her and I can't wait to see more. Her interactions with the kids are also awesome and really help to define her and the kids as both learn and grow up. We haven't been able to focus on them a ton but with basically only seven (eight? I could write an entire review about just Akasha) creatures the pool is small but that's good as it leaves room for the players to really get involved.
    Grammar:
    My one complaint is grammar. There are a lot of typos, poorly structured sentences and such. It creates a moment or two each chapter where I have to take a step back and try to figure out what was supposed to be here and hope I am right. Im pretty sure the messed grammar is sometimes intentional when interacting with the kids and mortals but I can't be sure and that hurts the moment a little.
    Overall:
    Fantastic premise and I have faith the story will progress in interesting ways. They have so much potential and I could see so much content in this universe. The author isn't even limited to specific themes or stories due to the design of the universe they created. Sp
  • Saligia666Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I Love the storry and ITS uniqe aproach ON a Gamerstorry. But i find that the Implementation of the system coild bei done better and more Compact. Fürther more the imlimentation of different languages is a good thaught but hard for Readers expetacularry so because of the many different races.
    But all in all ITS a verry ingrnius storry that i Like to read more of
  • CafRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    This story starts off really strong, the MC has a good source of motivation and inner conflict due to trauma. The VR itself is quite interesting too.
    Problem is, the trauma itself seems to be resolved rather quickly and only used rarely Later on when it should be a life long sort of impact.
    I would’ve liked to see more of the MC too, since the fact is that the longer the story goes the more side stories appear, most of which lasting at the very least ten whole chapters. I came here for a creation story, not for a story about people living inside a world.
    I also found a few… off-putting comments from the narrator about the MC’s appearance which is quite uncomfortable to read.
    Overall, the story has incredible potential, but it’s suffocated by side stories.

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