Borrowing Divinity

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Ash is transported to a world full of magic and intrigue, and apparently without a soul?

Will he adapt to his new life, or will the brain-eating mosquitos do away with him? Only time will tell.

Edit: Sorry guys, this story is on hiatus for the forseeable future. I've improved much in the craft since I wrote this, and if I did revisit it I would probably want to rewrite entirely the existing chapters.

Chapters(6 total)

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  • JwmcdanRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    There is a solid story in here. It's well told with no grammar issues that I can see. The transition into the world feels a little abrupt and so far there is little worldbuilding. I'm interested to see where it goes and how the author improves.
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