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Status
Hiatus
Author
Soul River

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ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADFEMALE LEADTRAGEDYSCI-FISUPERNATURALMARTIAL ARTSMULTIPLE LOVERSROMANCE SUBPLOTSCHOOL LIFESTRONG LEADGENDER BENDERPSYCHOLOGICALMALE LEADSECRET IDENTITYMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSSHORT STORYPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAIPOST APOCALYPTICLOW FANTASYMYSTERYREINCARNATIONWAR AND MILITARYGRIMDARKHIGH FANTASYGENETICALLY ENGINEEREDMYTHOSSOFT SCI-FISTRATEGYURBAN FANTASYCULTIVATIONSPACE OPERAWUXIAARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCETECHNOLOGICALLY ENGINEEREDATTRACTIVE LEAD

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4.5/ 5.0
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160
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76,189

Chapters(72 total)

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  • mariusKattRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    So far its a decent start. There are of course grammer issues (already known, i'm not knocking on you about this) but it has come down to a sense of 'magically knowing things' and rushing explantions to those not in the know. Personally? I would have bought training rounds for the 203 and let Irene practice, and somehow she just sprays and kills with the AK? I am currently active duty for eight years and have yet to see a 'natural shooter'. A good reproach is to either re-work the written chapters, or just have a setting per chapter. Everything feels rushed like you have all this info and it could be great, but its just getting ideas out there instead of having a set direction. Take your time boss, space out the conversations and read them out loud to get a good feel for them. I have high hopes!