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Status

Hiatus

Author

Soul River

• Blank: Chapter Thirty One - A Single Child
  Nov 4, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Thirty - Echidna
  Nov 3, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Twenty Nine - Augmentation
  Nov 2, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Twenty Nine - Fleet Action
  Nov 1, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Twenty Eight - Deep Stand
  Oct 31, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Twenty Seven - Hullborer, Redux
  Oct 30, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Twenty Six - ATT, Take Two
  Oct 29, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Twenty Five - Shower
  Oct 28, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Twenty Four - Dustin
  Oct 27, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Twenty Three - Buckles
  Oct 26, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Twenty Two - Birthday
  Oct 25, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Twenty One - Night Light
  Oct 24, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Twenty - Breakthrough
  Oct 23, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Nineteen - My Left
  Oct 22, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Eighteen - Hornets
  Oct 21, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Seventeen - Hullborer
  Oct 20, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Sixteen - Dodgeball
  Oct 19, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Fifteen - Flip
  Oct 18, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Fourteen - Barbeque
  Oct 17, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Thirteen - Wake Up Call
  Oct 16, 2023

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• mariusKattRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  So far its a decent start. There are of course grammer issues (already known, i'm not knocking on you about this) but it has come down to a sense of 'magically knowing things' and rushing explantions to those not in the know. Personally? I would have bought training rounds for the 203 and let Irene practice, and somehow she just sprays and kills with the AK? I am currently active duty for eight years and have yet to see a 'natural shooter'. A good reproach is to either re-work the written chapters, or just have a setting per chapter. Everything feels rushed like you have all this info and it could be great, but its just getting ideas out there instead of having a set direction. Take your time boss, space out the conversations and read them out loud to get a good feel for them. I have high hopes!