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Status

Hiatus

Author

Soul River

• Blank: Chapter Seventy-One - Dragon
  Jan 25, 2024
• Blank: Chapter Seventy - Princess
  Jan 18, 2024
• Blank: Chapter Sixty Nine - Grace
  Jan 11, 2024
• Blank: Chapter Sixty Eight - Beacon
  Jan 4, 2024
• Blank: Chapter Sixty Seven - Ship One Two Nine
  Dec 28, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Sixty Six - Jahm
  Dec 21, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Sixty Five - Gravity
  Dec 14, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Sixty Four - Log Cabin
  Dec 7, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Sixty Three - Armor
  Dec 6, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Sixty Two - Charts
  Dec 5, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Sixty One - Tiamat
  Dec 4, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Sixty - Racing
  Dec 3, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Fifty-Nine - Problem
  Dec 2, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Fifty-Eight - Links
  Dec 1, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Fifty-Seven - Empress
  Nov 30, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Fifty-Six - Andrews
  Nov 29, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Fifty-Five - Volunteers
  Nov 28, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Fifty-Four - Countdown
  Nov 27, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Fifty-Three - Star Killer
  Nov 26, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Fifty-Two - Swarm
  Nov 25, 2023

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• mariusKattRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  So far its a decent start. There are of course grammer issues (already known, i'm not knocking on you about this) but it has come down to a sense of 'magically knowing things' and rushing explantions to those not in the know. Personally? I would have bought training rounds for the 203 and let Irene practice, and somehow she just sprays and kills with the AK? I am currently active duty for eight years and have yet to see a 'natural shooter'. A good reproach is to either re-work the written chapters, or just have a setting per chapter. Everything feels rushed like you have all this info and it could be great, but its just getting ideas out there instead of having a set direction. Take your time boss, space out the conversations and read them out loud to get a good feel for them. I have high hopes!