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Status

Hiatus

Author

Soul River

• Blank: Chapter Fifty-One - Redundancy
  Nov 24, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Fifty - Bunkers
  Nov 23, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Forty Nine - Guilt
  Nov 22, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Forty Eight - Ambush
  Nov 21, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Forty Seven - Armor
  Nov 20, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Forty Six - Waiting
  Nov 19, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Forty Five - DeLann
  Nov 18, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Forty Four - Mighty
  Nov 17, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Forty Three - Madness
  Nov 16, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Forty Two - Mutterchen-Ter
  Nov 15, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Forty One - Oatmeal
  Nov 14, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Forty - Huff
  Nov 13, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Thirty Nine - Stretch
  Nov 12, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Thirty Eight - Conference
  Nov 11, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Thirty Seven - Insubordinate
  Nov 10, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Thirty Six - Soro
  Nov 9, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Thirty Five - Something's Come Up
  Nov 8, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Thirty Four - Quick
  Nov 7, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Thirty Three - Ship Doctor
  Nov 6, 2023
• Blank: Chapter Thirty Two - Imperial Orders
  Nov 5, 2023

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• mariusKattRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  So far its a decent start. There are of course grammer issues (already known, i'm not knocking on you about this) but it has come down to a sense of 'magically knowing things' and rushing explantions to those not in the know. Personally? I would have bought training rounds for the 203 and let Irene practice, and somehow she just sprays and kills with the AK? I am currently active duty for eight years and have yet to see a 'natural shooter'. A good reproach is to either re-work the written chapters, or just have a setting per chapter. Everything feels rushed like you have all this info and it could be great, but its just getting ideas out there instead of having a set direction. Take your time boss, space out the conversations and read them out loud to get a good feel for them. I have high hopes!