Astral: Into the New World

At the very top of Mountain Ard, there stood the empty ruins of a citadel overlooking the unsung Kingdom of Kan. Underneath this site, a catacomb was built but none of the thousand souls lingered anymore. Until one day, a strange life finally emerged. A human separated from its Earthly form- physically unwielded in this world, too rare and hunted for its kind. Her name is Narya, the first Earth being to arrive through the ancient portal of the unmagical land. And with her arrival, adventure and romance unfolds between her and the grey-scaled noble, Erduas. But is love possible between two different creatures bonded as predator and prey at first?

***Extra Details***

1. English is my second languagebut I am doing my best to give you the best shot on this journey.

2. Fantasy Romance, Action & Violencewould be the center of the story

3. I am avoiding clichésas much as I can

4.I valuecomments and suggestions, hoping to receive one.

***I hope this story keeps you entertained(´ｰ∀ｰ`)