Apostle of Sin

Self-Published

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Description

Novel has been Overhauled and is being actively rewritten and posted here:

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/71331/apostle-of-sin-overhaul

Chapters(83 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • EmilowishRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    A good turn your brain off story that's easy to follow, an easy to understand power system, and mostly likeable caharacters.
    The biggest downside of this story is it's first few chapters, they are quite hard to sit through, especially whenever the character named "Chris" is in focus. Most of the time he isn't in focus, and instead a group of more likeable characters, and the MC.
    Also a minor critic is an IMO completly unnecessary one chapter time skip, which goes back again in time the next chapter, that part completly broke my immersion and was pointlessly confusing, if it was suppose to be foreshadowing it would need some work.
    Overall it won't be for everyone, but those that like the genre and think the synopsis sounds good should give it a try.:)
  • Ashish526Royal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    First of all there is nothing that goes MCs way. He is powerful but never wins a fight when it matters. Around ch 40 finally lost the interest when MC meets a guy and world freezes. Other than that he never really actively tries to get powerful and when he does , it was skipped. LitRPG tag is there but you can read the story without them basically.
    Overall good but I like primal hunter kind of MC