Adventures of Ian The Wise

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Description

This story is about Ian.

Ian is currently lacking in "wise" department.

BEFORE YOU START

take into consideration:

- First8chapters span just1day of the story. It starts slowly, so don't expect major MC development right of the bat. With volume it gains momentum and maybe some sense. It's up to you to decide.

- Humor presented here is my own. I find it funny at times, but you most probably won't like it. (There is no comedy tag!)

- Writing this story is for me to unwind, reduce the stress I build and learn English in spare time.

- Lots of internal monologue. Less, starting Ch.5. No dialog in prolog and ch.1.

- This is my first ever work. It's not perfect and should never be. It has 3 - 6 k words per ch on average.

- You are free to insult the novel, but not the author. I'm not my story. Please, mind the difference. If you wish to leave a review,FULLY!read at least first 7 chapters. Don't jump them, you'll miss stuff, making your review unreliable.

Information

Status: Ongoing
Year: 2022
Author: Captain Cabanos

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Rating: 3.0/ 5.0
Views: 3,510

Chapters(14 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

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★★★★ 3.5
What would drive anyone to write something like this I don't know.
The story has no purpose as stated in the synopsis, but that also means we are witnessing a bad slice of life story (which I don't even like).
When reading the synopsis I thought it was going to be something like Asher the Insane, but, even if inconsistent, Asher had wants, and so a purpose to walk, or barrel himself, forward.
Here the only thing that seems to drive the mc is his slight obsession with his dignity. Now, you would think that comedic or misunderstandings at the level of Overlord or similar (as we are dealing with a strong from the start mc) would give spice to the story, but all of that is dashed when he starts to be blatantly used by the first girl he met.
Of course I skipped ahead and read the last chapter (8) just to make sure I wasn't judjing too soon and I shouldn't have dropped the work, but I have seen no changes.
Overall I can't even give a rating as I can't judge the purpose of something that doesn't even want to have it, so the stars are only a grammar (5) and style (3, too prosaic, a bad choivìce if you don't have to say anything in the end) index.