ABANOKH

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The Veil has shattered.The human world is now a hunting ground. For a nobody like Yasu, this should be the end. Instead, it’s a new, terrifying beginning. Given an ultimatum by a Jinn prince -serve or die -Yasu becomes a vessel for powers that defy reason. He is no longer human, but not yet a monster. To forge his own destiny, he must navigate a brutal world of dark bargains and ancient feuds, where one wrong move means a fate worse than death. Survival is just the first test. What to Expect: Modern Urban Fantasy with a Twist:A contemporary world collides with ancient Jinn mythology, political intrigue, and hidden magical societies. A Reluctant Anti-Hero's Journey:Follow a protagonist who starts from nothing, forced to make morally gray choices to survive. He isn't a hero, he's a survivor adapting to a world that wants him dead. Unique Power System:Yasu's abilities are tied directly to the jinn he hosts, leading to creative and strategic combat where he must use his limited "ammunition" wisely. Fast-Paced, Brutal Action:From gritty back-alley brawls to epic supernatural showdowns, the combat is visceral and has consequences. Intriguing Side Characters:A powerful and eccentric Jinn Prince, a cunning right-hand man, and a sassy spectral roommate (Marid) add depth, humor, and conflict to the story. World-Building & Mystery:Uncover the secrets of the Jinn world, the rules of the High Council. ABANOKH MANGA CHAPTER 1📓 Patreon

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Status: Ongoing
Year: 2025
Author: NotTheFirstTime

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.6/ 5.0
Followers: 310
Views: 19,145

Chapters(64 total)

What readers say about ABANOKH

“Review: This story explodes off the page with style, energy, and a supernatural edge that’s hard to resist. From the first chapter, the pacing grabs you and doesn’t let go. Whether it’s Yasu’s unshakable drive, Marid’s mysterious presence, or Zak’s chaotic…”
AnniJacksonRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“This story is full of action, supernatural powers, and intense fights that never get boring. The author knows how to keep the reader engaged, with battles that feel exciting and high-stakes. The scenes move quickly and the pacing makes it hard to stop readi…”
Iron RevenantRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(8)

AnniJacksonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Review:
This story explodes off the page with style, energy, and a supernatural edge that’s hard to resist. From the first chapter, the pacing grabs you and doesn’t let go. Whether it’s Yasu’s unshakable drive, Marid’s mysterious presence, or Zak’s chaotic charm, the characters push the story forward with real momentum. The world they inhabit is grimy, brutal, and wildly imaginative — it feels like stepping into a dark anime universe with its own rules and twisted logic.
Plot:
At its core, the story’s about survival and power in a brutal world — a simple premise, but it’s executed with flair. The Jalat arc is especially strong, mixing raw, visceral action with a real sense of emotional weight. As the world expands, so do the stakes. The shifting alliances and power struggles keep things fresh, and every chapter builds on the last with purpose.
Characters:
Yasu is a solid lead — tough, clever, and surprisingly funny in quieter moments. Marid isn’t just comic relief; he adds depth and brings real heart to the story. Zak and Noufal have serious scene-stealing energy, full of flair and unpredictability. And Jalat? Absolute force of nature. Each major character has a distinct voice and brings something unique to the table.
Writing Style:
The writing is tight, vivid, and cinematic. The fight scenes are pure anime — fast, stylish, and easy to picture. Dialogue snaps with personality and humor, striking a great balance between tension and levity. The tone shifts smoothly, keeping things intense without ever feeling overwhelming.
Grammar & Readability:
It’s clean and well-polished. The prose flows nicely, punctuation’s on point, and the dialogue feels natural. Some of the longer paragraphs could be broken up for easier reading on a screen, but overall, the writing feels professional and confident.
Final Thoughts:
This is a fast-moving, character-driven supernatural action story with real punch. It’s tailor-made for fans of anime-style battles, gritty worldbuilding, and compl
Iron RevenantRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story is full of action, supernatural powers, and intense fights that never get boring. The author knows how to keep the reader engaged, with battles that feel exciting and high-stakes. The scenes move quickly and the pacing makes it hard to stop reading once you start.
Story: The plot is straightforward but very fun. It’s mostly focused on battles and the tension between the characters, which works perfectly for this type of story. Each fight feels different and raises the stakes.
Characters: Yasu is a cool main character who’s determined and smart. Even when he’s badly hurt, he keeps fighting, which makes you root for him. Marid adds humor and personality, and Jalat is a great villain—huge, strong, and very intimidating. The cast feels alive and interesting.
Style: The writing is clear and vivid. It paints a great picture of the action without being confusing. The descriptions are easy to imagine, like watching an anime or movie.
Grammar: Very solid. There are no big mistakes, and the sentences read smoothly. Dialogue is natural and fits each character well.
Overall, this story is perfect for readers who love supernatural battles, strong characters, and fast-paced storytelling. It’s definitely worth reading!
LindaleeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This chapter is an excellent example of how tension, character development, and worldbuilding can seamlessly work together. Yasu’s entrance at the gate immediately sets the tone—he is confident, calculated, and chillingly composed. The exchange with the truck driver and his assistant adds a touch of humor while building suspense, creating a strong contrast between their fear and Yasu’s cold logic.
The introduction of The Iron Will is particularly compelling. She commands respect without theatrics, and her sharp dialogue gives immediate insight into her leadership style—measured, assertive, and unshaken even in the face of someone as dangerous as Yasu. The verbal sparring between the two is layered with negotiation, veiled threats, and political undercurrents, and it’s handled with impressive nuance.
The worldbuilding continues to shine here. The mention of the Baron’s mobile market and reflective barriers adds new intrigue and raises the stakes for Yasu’s mission. It also sets up a potential future antagonist with a supernatural edge, which fits the dark urban fantasy tone of the story perfectly.
Special mention goes to Mori, who delivers a light comedic touch without undercutting the scene’s seriousness. His attachment to the phone adds humanity and levity. Overall, this chapter is richly written, efficiently paced, and sets up the next arc beautifully.
Liora VanceRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story is an absolute standout in terms of concept, execution, and emotional depth. It’s a rare piece that manages to be both thrilling and deeply character-driven, immersing the reader from start to finish.
Story:
The narrative structure is incredibly tight and well-paced. Every chapter feels purposeful, and the buildup to major reveals is handled with skill. There's a clear vision behind the plot, and the balance between action, dialogue, and introspection is nearly perfect. It's exciting, clever, and full of moments that hit hard emotionally.
Characters:
The characters are among the strongest aspects of the story. Each one feels distinct and fleshed out, with motivations that make sense and arcs that evolve meaningfully over time. The protagonist’s journey is especially well-written, and the supporting cast adds richness to the world.
Style:
The author has a great sense of tone and narrative voice. The scenes are vivid and flow smoothly, with well-placed emotional beats and clever use of dialogue. The descriptive language is strong without being overbearing, and the transitions are handled smoothly.
Grammar:
While the grammar doesn't ruin the experience, it's the one area where the story falters a bit. There are recurring minor errors—missing punctuation, inconsistent tenses, and awkward phrasing in places. A good proofreading pass or light editing could easily elevate this from excellent to near-perfect.
Overall, a highly recommended read that shines in nearly every area. Just a bit of polish on the grammar front would push it into masterpiece territory.
echoeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story is an exciting and emotional ride from beginning to end. The battle between Yasu and Jalat is written in a way that feels real and intense. Every punch, kick, and counterattack is described so clearly that it’s easy to picture everything as if it were a movie. The tension keeps building, and just when you think it’s over, the story throws in another surprise.
The writing style is strong and fast-paced, with vivid descriptions that help bring the world to life. The author does a great job balancing action with emotion, especially with the bond between Yasu and Marid. The pacing is excellent, making it hard to stop reading.
The grammar is very clean, with good sentence structure and smooth flow. Nothing ever feels confusing or awkward, and the dialogue sounds natural and fits each character well.
The story itself is exciting and full of twists. The final twist with Prince Zak at the end adds mystery and shows that there’s more to come.
The characters are well-developed, especially Yasu, who is tough but human. Jalat is a powerful and scary opponent, and Marid adds heart to the fight.
Overall, this is a great read that leaves you wanting more.
eliana8Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This chapter is a masterfully orchestrated descent from serenity into chaos. It begins with The Baron in a moment of total peace—a morning routine so precise and meditative it borders on ritualistic. The attention to detail here is exceptional: the soft hum of the air conditioner, the smell of clean hands, the minimalist breakfast, the cool-water immersion. These scenes don’t just flesh out The Baron—they mythologize him. He’s not merely a villain; he’s a man of order, control, and discipline.
But control is fleeting.
The moment he steps into the market, we see the other side of his persona. Still calm, still poised—but now with absolute authority. His rule is rooted not in fear, but in presence. When he speaks, people obey—not because he shouts, but because he doesn’t have to. The story cleverly uses simple acts—a lowered price, a rebuke, a sip of coffee—to show how he governs with precision, like a scalpel, not a hammer.
Then the perspective shifts.
From peace and power, we’re thrown into the high-stakes chaos of Victor’s steamship. Victor is calm, focused, jazz-loving—a sniper with nerves of steel. But that cool exterior cracks the moment he sees what’s coming: a jet ski launched at high velocity with a human missile onboard. What follows is an electrifying, cinematic action sequence that blends anime-style exaggeration with tactically choreographed movement.
Zak and Yasu’s approach is full of adrenaline and grit. The pacing becomes relentless. Bullets fly. Water explodes. Yasu is hurled through the air like a cannonball, dark jinn energy flaring. Every move has weight and consequence. The writing doesn’t just tell us what happens—it shows us how it feels to be there, in the middle of a supernatural assault, dancing between death and destiny.
Victor’s death is brutal, but it's what follows that truly twists the story.
Marid’s quiet theft of Victor’s remains—cloaked in secrecy and power—hints at a larger, darker subplot. His command, “Don’t tell Zak or Noufal”, re
jisooniverseRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The vibe is dark, gritty, and weird in all the right ways. The world feels super alive, the powers are sick, and the main character is an absolute menace lol. Every chapter had me like ??? and then OH OK. You think it’s going one way and then it hits you with something wild outta nowhere.
If you’re into stuff that feels a little unhinged, a little badass, and totally original, just read it. You won’t be bored for a second!
shadowex13Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Oh, I am so happy that Ibrahim Sama decided to complete Abanokh as a novel. Truly, this story is an electrifying blend of dark fantasy, supernatural warfare, and gritty character drama — and it carries the unmistakable stamp of Ibrahim's creative brilliance.
From the chilling opening in Laslow City's Dark Side to the jaw-dropping face-off between Yasu and the brutal Salvage King, Jalat, every moment had me locked in. The pacing is relentless, the imagery vivid, and the characters? Absolutely unforgettable.
Ibrahim Sama has always had a gift for crafting otherworldly threats, and the white jinn is no exception — its eerie presence and the horror it brings feels like something only he could conjure. And that moment when Yasu refuses to help the dying man? Cold. Powerful. Perfectly in character.
I’ve been following Ibrahim Sama’s work for a while now, and it’s exciting — thrilling, even — to see him elevate this world into a fully fleshed-out novel. The lore surrounding Prince Zak Dejour, Marid’s cryptic powers, and Yasu’s unwavering resolve feels like it’s just scratching the surface of something huge.
The battle choreography is cinematic. I could see the fight between Yasu and Jalat unfold like a movie. And when Jalat launched himself into the sky with the GRAVITY BASH? Ibrahim, you legend — that scene alone belongs in the halls of epic fantasy greatness.
I can’t wait to see where Yasu’s journey takes us next, and what more Ibrahim Sama has in store. If Abanokh continues at this level of intensity and worldbuilding, we may be witnessing the rise of a new powerhouse in genre fiction.